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Topic: used to
no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Sun 02/19/17 05:55 PM
Used to walk everywhere with you hand-in-hand. That feeling of togetherness and love and security.. used to walk ahead of you and open doors for you. Used to ask you frist what you'd like to order when we dined Used to kiss your lips as you kissed mine..ever time.. Used to say good morning and goodnight.. Used to say I love you.all the time Used to..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 02/21/17 06:06 PM
Your words sound so heartbroken...Im so sorry. For your pain.

no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Tue 02/21/17 06:22 PM Edited by no1phD on Tue 02/21/17 06:23 PM
Ohh thanks.. it is a bit unbearable sometimes but putting it down on the LCD kind of helps.. but when you give yourself over completely to love you're bound to have your heart.. Squashed like a ripe tomato...lol

BrentFL Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 1028	Wed 02/22/17 08:42 AM
Yeah, you can feel the sadness in that one... well done.

mysticalview21 Joined Sat 06/28/14 Posts: 5462	Wed 02/22/17 02:14 PM
I agree ... be still my heart ... wow ... some nice writes here ... letting it all out ... that's good ... what else could you do ... seems you where not left with any other choice ...

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