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Sun 11/12/17 03:41 AM
Give me sunshine over dollars any day.  I have had some dollars I didn't do a lot of good with them any way
Give Me Freedom over Fortune give me friends over fame
It doesn't matter if anybody remembers my labors or not .

Give me some love over luxury.  sweet memory seated sunset silhouette in sand sex sweat still fresh.


Give me gratitude over Grudge.
Let me take the opportunity to find  humble grace.

Gimme live music over live feed.  FromFolk festivals .to E.d.m. shows,anything to tap my toes  move my body .Blues, rock, punk and baroque...
all  music connects , done best at the source.
Gimme authenticity over illusion .you know I ain't  fooled. Can't fool the foolish after all .
Gimme light over darkness .
You gotta go out of your way and put effort  In being an *** hole, I aught to know .I was one. ..... now a Good guy In perpetual training .

Give me knowledge over information.
And the wisdom to know the difference.

Give me integrity over style.
I didn't vote so go .
Blow smoke up some one else's.
But...then again
Give me forgiveness over spite.
Don't wanna weigh down from yesterday's bags...I'll just leave them on the curb .

Gimme Inclusion over  bigotry .
Gay  . Bi. Les Trans.  Straight. Muslim Catholic .white. black yellow red . Blue.
I'll afford no idiot compassion for idiot behavior..however I will make all the time in the world for awesome.

Give me clarity over confusion.
 I'll  will take a touch of chaos though
It seems its the Price of living . So might as well Embrace it when it comes.
Give me brains over Braun. But let me muscle my way through hard times .
Give me .........
Give me sunshine over dollars any day.






no photo
Sun 11/12/17 07:38 AM
Nice intro into the first layer of you...

Thanks for sharing..


mysticalview21's photo
Sun 11/12/17 09:26 AM
I loved it ... keep writing ...
had not seen anything like this in a long time ...nice...
thanks for sharing ...

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Sat 09/25/21 09:03 AM
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JulieABush's photo
Sat 09/25/21 01:40 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .