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Topic: American Poet Second Stage
Jimi366's photo
Tue 11/14/06 07:34 PM
The Second Stage is now open and is open to everyone.
If you didn't pass auditions take heart,
you can post here, kick ass and win by popular vote,
face the Main Stage Winner, and win it all.
YOU STILL HAVE A CHANCE TO WIN!!!!!!
This thread will be open until Wed at 6pm Eastern Time
to allow for 3 hours of voting under a thread started
at 6pm eastern called Vote For Second Stage Winner Here.
Best of Luck to everyone.
Your American Poet Judges,
Jimi366, Ontario, Clare2112

italianstud's photo
Tue 11/14/06 07:38 PM
Your Pain

Your pain will come,
and when it does I will
laugh. As you cry and beg,
for it all to stop, as
I stab you in your side.
Your pain will come, and
it will hurt. I'll yell
and scream at you, as your
lying, dieing. I will just
stand there Staring at
your lifeless body, as
your soul begins to emerge.
Emerge from your weak body.
As you die.

Ricky Lawrence Olson

Jimi366's photo
Tue 11/14/06 07:55 PM
I like Dark Poetry and this is as Dark as it gets.
Poetry is a great way to release feelings.
Thanks for entering!

snacky's photo
Tue 11/14/06 08:42 PM
release feelings? so your saying he wants to kill someone?

Italian do you want to kill someone?

Ontario's photo
Tue 11/14/06 08:49 PM
Okay...Whoa....Snacky has a point...could this be a cry for help....?

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Tue 11/14/06 08:49 PM
Naw ppl here dont do that we all got our heads on properly

snacky's photo
Tue 11/14/06 08:50 PM
LMFAO lol lmfao oh omg lol hahahaha

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Tue 11/14/06 08:51 PM
dont ruin this thread snacky its not for our useless banter Im sry poets
let me get her out of here.

Jimi366's photo
Tue 11/14/06 10:17 PM
bump

Jimi366's photo
Tue 11/14/06 10:21 PM
bump

michael1313's photo
Tue 11/14/06 11:06 PM
DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY ABOUT TH PAIN POEM...HE NEEDS SOME HELP?

no photo
Tue 11/14/06 11:24 PM
Les be clear here ..just because some of us write dark poetry does not
mean we want to hurt someone, kill someone, kill ourselves or hurt
ourselves...some of us write dark poetry to release the pain from within
instead of doing harm to others or ourselves.Also some write it for
shock value..just to see how far they can push society

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 05:31 AM
bump

Ontario's photo
Wed 11/15/06 09:02 AM
Okay...fine...so where are the rest of the poems...?

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 10:12 AM
bump

GANJA's photo
Wed 11/15/06 10:13 AM
bump whos mom now?

Ontario's photo
Wed 11/15/06 10:17 AM
Dude...stop telling corny jokes...if someone don,t post soon...I
will jump into the Shark Tank...!

no photo
Wed 11/15/06 10:23 AM
ITS OK, CALM DOWN ONTARIO.
ITS NOT WORTH IT MAN, COME ON DUDE.
WE GO BACK TO FAR, FOR ME TO LET YOU THROW YOUR SELF IN THEIR?
YOU CAN HAVE THE SHARKS EMAIL ME IF THEY WANT?

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 11:27 AM
Spread the word that anyone who did not win last night
can post in here and still have a chance at winning.
The winner here takes on the main stage winner tomorrow.
Anyone can post in here and still have a chance at winning.
Jim

iceprincess's photo
Wed 11/15/06 11:52 AM
Donald

Like a lamb led to slaughter I followed you
I knelt at your altar of pain
you shatterd my dreams
you took my soul
In cage of misery I did lie
I heard your laughter
I felt your torment
on the outside i seemed perfect
inside I was dying
you knew this
you laughed
I begged you to realeas me from your bonds
you said you owned me
I was bought and
And pay for it I did
I never knew what true hell was before
I now know
Free of you I wanted to be
Free of you I now am
I pick up the pieces of my life
My castle of ice I build
I may be sheer
I may be cold
but I will hurt no more

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