Topic: She (string of haiku)
Artist's photo
Fri 05/08/20 06:58 AM
In dreams I'm drowning
I can't swim, losing my breath
In her eyes deep pools.

Drifting in dark seas,
I see her brightly lit smile
Lighting up the night.

Peace found for awhile,
A soft wind, with her slight touch
All storms fade away.

I do not need much,
Her kisses feed my hunger,
Her juice sates my thirst.

Let me go under,
Leave me to drown in my sleep
If she is my sea.

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Fri 05/08/20 07:07 AM
Edited by 2KidsMom on Fri 05/08/20 07:07 AM
She sounds lovely.
good read.

Artist's photo
Fri 05/08/20 07:23 AM
Thank u.. But it's about no one particular and yet about every woman and yet only the one special one..u know what I mean... How could u?I don't even know. Lol

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Fri 05/08/20 08:09 AM
Edited by 2KidsMom on Fri 05/08/20 08:10 AM

Thank u.. But it's about no one particular and yet about every woman and yet only the one special one..u know what I mean... How could u?I don't even know. Lol


ah yes The Perfect one...in your minds eye...The forbidden One The One that brings your mind to a climax
I know what you mean...I used to have one....

flowerforyou waving
Have a blessed day and be safe till I read you again.


JulieABush's photo
Sat 05/09/20 01:40 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .