Topic: letting you go by Feallan Angele
Feallan Angele's photo
Thu 09/10/20 08:53 AM
There's sympathy deep within my heart

At first I barely don't know how and where to start

There's a throbbing pain deep within my heart

As if I was aimed and shoot by a dart

There are times that I can't sleep at night

An inevitable pain and sadness I cannot fight

There's no happiness in me that I can sight

I'm hoping to see the remedy through the light

I know

I know that love is quite intricate

I'm seeking for answers that were accurate

I'm floundered , this feeling should eradicate

Why on earth there are doubts and questions that I can't state?

I looked up in that starless firmament

Sitting in the corner where people can't pass by

All I can do is to silently cry

Realizing and remembering stuffs that I once relied

It's hard

It's hard for me to set you free

It's hard

It's hard to forget you easily

Our story was written in the past

Yet my love for you cannot surpass

It's hard to eliminate the moments we shared

It's hard to exterminate the memories we treasured

For once

Can you please do me a favor?

A time will do

Can you give me time, a li'l time with you?

Time that might ease all these pain

Time that made me insane

Can we dance in the midst of the rain?

Can we kiss between the endless song with a sweet refrain?

Can we act like we love each other just like before?

Can we do all those stuffs we did afore?

Can we bring back that past we buried long ago?

Can we do all of these before letting you go?

I'll no longer hold you

Yes 

I'll set you free

Our love may fade as well us our memories

I can still remember you whenever I see your initials carved in this tree

But

It won't change the fact that you're no longer mine

No longer with me


JulieABush's photo
Fri 09/11/20 12:55 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Feallan Angele's photo
Sat 09/12/20 12:46 AM
thank you :blush:

VintageMXer's photo
Sat 09/12/20 08:57 PM
jesus. in time the pain will diminish. have faith dear.

Feallan Angele's photo
Mon 09/14/20 07:57 PM
it's now totally diminished

evalyn endriga's photo
Wed 09/16/20 05:49 PM
Awesome choice of words.

no photo
Tue 10/05/21 09:40 PM
Quite moving!

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Wed 10/06/21 02:30 AM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:
Thieir is one of mine:innocent:
With same of pain,
She never strain,
Even in rain.. dedicated to her Hope
Who is she, she knows
Blessing of Waves

Aatheera's photo
Wed 10/06/21 06:24 AM
There's sympathy deep within my heart

At first I barely don't know how and where to start

There's a throbbing pain deep within my heart

As if I was aimed and shoot by a dart

There are times that I can't sleep at night

An inevitable pain and sadness I cannot fight

There's no happiness in me that I can sight

I'm hoping to see the remedy through the light

I know

I know that love is quite intricate

I'm seeking for answers that were accurate

I'm floundered , this feeling should eradicate

Why on earth there are doubts and questions that I can't state?

I looked up in that starless firmament

Sitting in the corner where people can't pass by

All I can do is to silently cry

Realizing and remembering stuffs that I once relied

It's hard

It's hard for me to set you free

It's hard

It's hard to forget you easily

Our story was written in the past

Yet my love for you cannot surpass

It's hard to eliminate the moments we shared

It's hard to exterminate the memories we treasured

For once

Can you please do me a favor?

A time will do

Can you give me time, a li'l time with you?

Time that might ease all these pain

Time that made me insane

Can we dance in the midst of the rain?

Can we kiss between the endless song with a sweet refrain?

Can we act like we love each other just like before?

Can we do all those stuffs we did afore?

Can we bring back that past we buried long ago?

Can we do all of these before letting you go?

I'll no longer hold you

Yes 

I'll set you free

Our love may fade as well us our memories

I can still remember you whenever I see your initials carved in this tree

But

It won't change the fact that you're no longer mine

No longer with me

could feel the emotion behind each line :slight_smile: well written :slight_smile:

Aatheera's photo
Wed 10/06/21 06:24 AM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:
Thieir is one of mine:innocent:
With same of pain,
She never strain,
Even in rain.. dedicated to her Hope
Who is she, she knows
Blessing of Waves

nice :slight_smile:

McSeanMD's photo
Wed 10/06/21 06:25 AM
Awesome poem! Happy the pain is fading!!