Topic: HYMN OF LOVE
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Wed 03/31/21 10:33 AM
Edited by Unknow on Wed 03/31/21 10:42 AM
HYMN OF LOVE

In my soul a hymn of love, a lullaby that awaits you in the night
A song that makes me dream of dancing peace with you in your light

My words to you speak of a lover's desire, reciting an endless hymn
Asking you to be loved between my mental sky and my earthly dream

I hope your ear hears the priceless hymn of love which is a sacred kiss
Who wants to meet a virgin ear membrane to sing for you forever in infinite bliss

To pierce the diaphragm of your ear and softly touch your soul like a whisper
To make you feel the ecstasy of eternal love in the back of your mind so deeper.

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Wed 03/31/21 10:38 AM
That was great, I hope you find that virgin stripper you desire, with her hymn intact

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Wed 03/31/21 06:44 PM
Thanks for the comment, and I want you to understand what I wrote and what you read.
1- Not everyone who wrote some words, that means he wrote poetry and became a poet.
2- Not everyone who has read poetry can understand it.
3- Poetry is the best of words, the butter of speech, it can only be understood by those who have a minimal knowledge of the philosophical alphabet.
* Note: I didn't mention a virgin stripper in my poem. I talked about the virgin membrane in the ear of a lover, who was invited to listen to the hymn of love.

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Thu 04/01/21 03:56 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Thu 04/01/21 08:46 AM
:thumbsup: thanks Julie