Topic: Found it Empty
Irene's photo
Sun 05/08/22 05:46 AM
So many days you've been ignore
So many text you dont read or reply
So may calls you have reject
The hate and love are more conflict.

I tried to fixed things i didnt break
I try to mend the wond i never did
I thought its me who can fix it
I thought love is all i need to ignore it

But then everyday past more and more
And things get worst than before
I felt i am the one who is holding back
And seeking for the strength to unhold you.

I found myself on the dark corner
Thinking of things you have done before
This time i realize how foolish i am
To keep on loving someone so damn

Liquid in my eyes stop on dropping
This time is ok, i did my best
If i let go its not my lost
I clear my mind and heart and let him go.

Its my first time to ignore you
I am right, you treat me less
I just recieve one message
No saying sorry or worrying on me

I made you treat me like this
By loving you so much
I made you so unfair
By always being there when you need me

I deserve love and care like you do
I know, i will not recieve it from someone like you
I deserve replies and answered calls
I deserve to in the line of your priority

This time i step back
This time i stop that
This time i will love myself better than you do
This time i will give myself a time to be happy.

This feelings is empty for someone like you.

no photo
Sun 05/08/22 06:01 AM
Love your piece. So grateful to come crossed here and read your artwork :two_hearts:.

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Sun 05/08/22 07:24 AM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:

JulieABush's photo
Sun 05/08/22 12:27 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Vibes's photo
Mon 05/09/22 04:09 AM
Effluent thought
Nice lines

Being ignored
Brings feelings
Bothering starts
Balancing fails
Behaviour changes
Braintree crush
Determination holds
Development starts

Life after love failďs
Lovely explained

All the best


Irene's photo
Thu 05/12/22 03:17 AM

Love your piece. So grateful to come crossed here and read your artwork :two_hearts:.


Thank you much i really appreciate this. :heart::heart::heart::heart:

Irene's photo
Thu 05/12/22 03:18 AM

N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:


Thank you so much :heart::heart::heart:

Irene's photo
Thu 05/12/22 03:19 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thank you so much :heart::heart::heart:

Irene's photo
Thu 05/12/22 03:20 AM

Effluent thought
Nice lines

Being ignored
Brings feelings
Bothering starts
Balancing fails
Behaviour changes
Braintree crush
Determination holds
Development starts

Life after love failďs
Lovely explained

All the best




Thank you so much, i appreciate it very well. :heart::heart::heart: