Topic: Eat or be Eaten
technovative's photo
Wed 10/12/22 06:16 PM
Edited by technovative on Wed 10/12/22 06:38 PM
Galloping galleon bucking gales
drowning stallion trotting water,
humpbacked whales
swimming swift from slaughter.
Command chain rift, mutiny bound
scuttled cutter sandbar aground.
Hagfish and squid, krill and flounder
dorsal fin rising circles around her,
chubby sailors splinting the keel -
she ain't built like Noah's ark,
great white hunters in search of a meal
their quivering blubber now food for a shark.

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Thu 10/13/22 01:55 AM
N:blossom:I:blossom:C:blossom:E :thumbsup:

JulieABush's photo
Thu 10/13/22 03:12 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

technovative's photo
Thu 10/13/22 08:41 AM
Thanks for the support guys.

no photo
Thu 10/13/22 01:04 PM
eat

Nick's photo
Sat 12/10/22 01:29 PM
Nice. I like the flow of your poetry.

technovative's photo
Sat 12/10/22 08:19 PM
Thanks Nick, I appreciate it.

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Sun 12/11/22 06:33 AM
Nice. I like the flow of your poetry.

Yes, an in flow you forgot to wish happy birthday to @Techn....