Topic: I'm afraid of what I may be capable of.
SlynkDphantom 's photo
Mon 10/30/23 07:28 PM
Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./

Laska Paul 's photo
Mon 10/30/23 11:13 PM

Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Have you taken Phd in English , I cant understand any "Sheeeeeeet" of your English .

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Tue 10/31/23 03:14 AM


Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Have you taken Phd in English , I cant understand any "Sheeeeeeet" of your English .



Dont be rude.



OT: Very well expressed. I can feel your conflict.

Thanks for sharing.

Redcarpet's photo
Tue 10/31/23 05:21 AM

Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./
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Nice one

Morticia's photo
Tue 10/31/23 05:32 AM
I see you're an aspiring rapper, you got some nice lyrics there

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Tue 10/31/23 07:21 PM

Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Just stay calm and don't over think. All will be well as long as your heart is truly good.
You express yourself very well

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Tue 10/31/23 07:29 PM


Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Have you taken Phd in English , I cant understand any "Sheeeeeeet" of your English .


Sup cuz? Be nice. Maybe I don't have room to talk because I have insulted people who talk crazy s__t that even a brain dead person could tell was S__t. But this is poetry and that's that person's feelings. Be respectful and treat people how you want to be treated. Have a good night sir

Laska Paul 's photo
Wed 11/01/23 12:07 AM
Anyone else who want to criticize about my comment , You are heartily Welcome. Next time even if someone writes bad , I will just say,, ITS NICE !!!

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Wed 11/01/23 01:14 AM

Anyone else who want to criticize about my comment , You are heartily Welcome. Next time even if someone writes bad , I will just say,, ITS NICE !!!


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Just remember breath in with the good and out with the bad 🤣🤣:wink:


SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:41 AM
Thank you, very much. I wrote it on the spot just for here.

SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:43 AM
It's all good appreciate the feedback. Nope I don't have a "PHD" in "engleeesh" but I have a masters degree in "how to take criticism seriously but not to heart" glad u got a laugh out of it. Be blessed

SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:45 AM



Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Have you taken Phd in English , I cant understand any "Sheeeeeeet" of your English .


Sup cuz? Be nice. Maybe I don't have room to talk because I have insulted people who talk crazy s__t that even a brain dead person could tell was S__t. But this is poetry and that's that person's feelings. Be respectful and treat people how you want to be treated. Have a good night sir


Appreciate you!

SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:47 AM


Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./


Just stay calm and don't over think. All will be well as long as your heart is truly good.
You express yourself very well


Thank you and no sweat on the comment u wrote. U didn't hurt my feelings, might not be the same for others though.

SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:48 AM

I see you're an aspiring rapper, you got some nice lyrics there


Thank you ill post something else soon

SlynkDphantom 's photo
Fri 11/03/23 11:49 AM


Im afraid to let me go cuz im afraid to watch me leave/ and im affraid that the one thing im afraid of, is hidden within me/ afraid to let me blow up im not afraid bueacaus i bleed/ what im afraid of is the fear, of you fearing for your safety because of me./
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Nice one


Thanks