Topic: My first post-Forever Mine-
cindy_tragic's photo
Mon 01/07/08 01:55 AM
We lavish one another
exposing who we are
And when the sun bids all farewell
there twinkles one lone star
Feelings felt are sometimes strained
our hearts can become cold
The words alone their passions play
are swords from days of old
But when the night bids all farewell
and all is gone it seems
There twinkles yet a falling star
blinking out her beams
The passion surges through the air
then reaches to the soul
Where once maintained a blazing fire
and ember begins to glow
That tiny star he calls his love
begins again to shine
And then through tears he calls to her
and says
"Forever Mine"

robinlynn42's photo
Mon 01/07/08 01:56 AM
flowerforyou

Dragonfire201's photo
Mon 01/07/08 01:57 AM
drinker

Adeph's photo
Mon 01/07/08 01:59 AM
beauty in tragedy, I love life.

That's a great one

sassyma's photo
Mon 01/07/08 02:05 AM
flowerforyou i enjoyed it thank you for sharing

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 01/07/08 06:49 AM
That was really sweet. I enjoyed and welcome to the poetry forums. Hope to see more.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/07/08 07:18 AM
very nicebigsmile

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/07/08 07:38 AM
flowerforyou