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Topic: a special treat
just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Sat 01/12/08 03:19 PM
Walk with me in this amber sunset Talk with me amidst the breeze Feel the water on our feet This is as wonderful as life can get These cherished moments of ease For a few moments problems we will cheat Grab this beauty for a minute Act as if it will never cease It is a lovely precious treat

aahrimaan Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 75	Sat 01/12/08 03:20 PM
wow! I'd really like to find someone to do that with!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 01/12/08 03:22 PM
A poem as beautiful as you are just_mary.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76391	Sat 01/12/08 03:25 PM
Awww very good indeed

just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Sat 01/12/08 04:12 PM
are we not all still looking but I can dream

scarlets Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 473	Sat 01/12/08 04:13 PM
Walk with me in this amber sunset Talk with me amidst the breeze Feel the water on our feet This is as wonderful as life can get These cherished moments of ease For a few moments problems we will cheat Grab this beauty for a minute ok! Act as if it will never cease It is a lovely precious treat

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 01/12/08 05:59 PM
Mary, that was really nice...feeling the water as it rushes around my feet already.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 01/12/08 06:35 PM


Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 01/12/08 09:04 PM
Wow! very nice.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 01/12/08 09:07 PM
Beautiful way to share... Great poem justmary!

tngxl65 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 6189	Sat 01/12/08 09:11 PM
wow

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 01/12/08 09:14 PM
A very NICE moment>>>>>>>>>>big smile

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