Tell me what you honestly think.

this ones kinda old.....


tell me i shouldnt fall for you
when your so lonely as i am
sitting there watching you
from that conor in my mind
i can see you all to clearer now

writing it out and making me read it
i understand where you come from
both of our lives have blossomed from ****
but were strong even though we are weak

sit back and watch us bloom
no one can stop us now
together we're different
apart we're the same
how you look at me
and tell me you dont care

you never have and never will
we dont know whats on our minds
we need to go out and chill for a while
are you there?
are you listening?

i need someone in my life
you need me in yours
together we're perfect
apart we're nothing

Nice

Are you talking to me?

Cheers mate

This is good 2

good

Welcome to my life, lonely is my life. After getting back from Iraq I dont even know who i am anymore

thanks you guys. i dont think i write well at all.

I love this and relate to it in a way :) Your a wonderful poet!

It is a great poem

you write great.

so are you

Good write!
Welcome to the poetry section and JSH!

You write very well and you share your feelings just as much. Keep up the good stuff and keep spamming.

thank you very much!