Topic: Freeform Poem.
SamhainPrincess's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:49 PM
Edited by SamhainPrincess on Wed 01/16/08 03:52 PM
(Gunna make this up as i go along. It's called Freeforming)

What to write,
What to say,
Time and time,
I waste the day.
How many know what it's like to live,
To love, to breath. Mind like a sciv.
When the clok stops and my brain slows;
My emotion shows, got no where to go.
How can it be that i've lost touch
With my inner child who's lost her clutch
on her teddy bear. Her security blanket falls
to reveal her inner adult who is no one at all.
So here we regress to find that we are all the same.
There's no one to blame but me.
Allowing my mind to bleed.
Nothing to write and nothing to say...
Time and Time,
I waste the day.


Amy (Samhainprincess) 2008


sexxyandsingle's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:51 PM
Pretty good for freestyling:smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:53 PM
Hope you find that inner child again real soon!
flowerforyou

SamhainPrincess's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:55 PM
Thanks guys.

I'm surprised you understood that metephore Teddy.

I was afraid no one would get it.

But don't you wish that sometimes you could be five again?
When boys had cooties? and kissing was gross?

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:57 PM
cooties??? laugh

OMG- I remember cooties! drinker

(er ummm) I think some men got um too! :wink:

flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 01/16/08 04:01 PM
pretty good

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 01/16/08 04:02 PM
Nah men get bigger bugs up their ---- my would ya look at the time!

SamhainPrincess's photo
Wed 01/16/08 04:05 PM
LOL

I Like cooties now...

I wonder if that was a thing that adults started?

Like back in the fourties when they told kids that if you kiss a guy with your bathingsuit on you'll get pregnant?

LOL

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 04:19 PM
good work

flowerforyou