Topic: Finding Expression
Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/11/08 07:16 PM
Finding Expression

What shall I say,
They're never felt right.
Keeping me up,
Tossing and turning all night.
Expressed are the feelings
Felt deep within,
Mixed with the reelings,
Emotions begin.
Her heart has invaded,
Her love felt so deep,
Words are so wished for,
Yet, found none I can keep.
My mind races inward,
Asking help from my heart,
Nothing replied as silence fell dark.
Lost in confusion and worry within
To find the true words
I wish to speak in.
Then from the darkness,
A voice heard so low,
Barely a whisper
That silently grows.
Tell her you love her
And hold her so dear
Promise you'll stay
And fight back her fear.
Tell her your heart speaks only in truth,
Give her the time she requires for proof.
Show her you're friends
With love at your core
And never you'll part
For you she'll adore.

Fadedspirit 2/11/2008

kc0003's photo
Mon 02/11/08 08:49 PM
finding the right expression at times can be hard
but when you do it can be so much more than just words

nice write faded

Shaden's photo
Mon 02/11/08 09:12 PM
How nice.flowerforyou Now, if you can only find me a man like that, I'd so appreciate!

pkh's photo
Mon 02/11/08 09:21 PM
That was really nice

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:04 AM
Thanks for the comment kc! You speak truth my friend...sometimes finding the right expression can be exhausting...lol

Thanks Shaden. If I find him, I'll send him your way. :smile:

Awww, thanks pkh!:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/12/08 07:22 AM
Awwwwwwwww Fade another great write!
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shauna22's photo
Tue 02/12/08 03:17 PM
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Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:27 PM
Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear!flowerforyou

:smile: Thanks shauna!