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Topic: lost without love...
michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 06:40 PM
lost without love...

lost,lonely feelings of guilt,what went wrong?
lost without love...

did your heart break when you heard my lonely song?
lost without love...

will you ever forgive me,will it take very long?
lost without love...

why does it have to hurt so much without you?
lost without love...

oh now what will I ever do?
lost without love...

my soul is ever more lonely without you,
lost without love...

feelings of love now empty my heart,
lost without love...

will we ever get back to what once was?
lost without love...

so very lost from your warm heart,
lost without love...

so very lost without your hand to hold on to...
lost without love...

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Sat 12/16/06 06:52 PM
This is very well written Michael one of your best!!

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 06:57 PM
Thanx C.C.P.,and if somebody puts this one to some music...
I want 20 % royalties!!!

karmafury's photo
Sat 12/16/06 07:04 PM
Very, very nice M. Proves the K.I.S.S. principal. I like it.

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 07:37 PM
yup...I play golf the same way...KISS
keep it simple stupid!!!
LMAO!!!

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Sat 12/16/06 07:48 PM
good poem and i to know your hearts song dude,,,good-one-micky.

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Sat 12/16/06 08:00 PM
Beautiful Michael!

stan4eVeR's photo
Sat 12/16/06 08:03 PM
yes you are. i mean the poem is lol

mtironroses's photo
Sat 12/16/06 08:03 PM
yep Michael... it deserves royalties !!!!

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 08:15 PM
funny what some quiet time can do for you...
now if we can find a music writer...hmmmmmm....

Will,JT,y'all help us out here will ya?

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 12/16/06 09:02 PM
Very beautiful...
Lost Love???
Nice!

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 09:41 PM
hey there S.C.G.!!! LONG TIME NO SEE!!!
glad you likes th poem too!!!

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/17/06 02:22 AM
bump

BillRoot's photo
Sun 12/17/06 04:14 AM
Good Michael,some times its,will I be able to forgive you.

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:33 AM
yea...but I would like to get this to music!!!

escapedlunatic's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:38 AM
Nice work Michael...talk about me you guys need to publish some of your
work...or at least try.

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:45 AM
well this is public huh?

do you know any music writers?

Jt, Will and Lion...???

String benders? where y'all at???

6 strings,or 12????

it's all good to my ears!!!

escapedlunatic's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:47 AM
I have sold a song before, but the band never made it.

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:51 AM
hey Billroot?
thought you was a guy?
you know your avatar is a girl lion?lol

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/17/06 10:53 AM
and Crazyman...your chapter is a good read!
and I still wants a copy when you get it done ok???

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