Topic: She's Taken Me
Bryon53067's photo
Thu 12/21/06 01:32 AM
Since we met,I have so many hopes
girl,you've given me many dreams
I really thought,you should know
you've got the best love,I've never seen

You are always on my mind
your thought,I can't ever erase
need you here,in this time
I can only dream of your beautiful face

Every little bit of my desire
is centered around you
I am longing to feel your fire
you're the best I've ever viewed

I want you so much more
there is not any other girl
I've ever been with before
that has taken me to another world

Bryon

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 12/21/06 06:32 AM
Now that is really sweet!
You GO bryon. Really nice writing...

no photo
Thu 12/21/06 07:18 AM
Hey dude if ya got this greeneyed lady digging your words you
most be putting them together good, wink,wink, lol.....
Its a good feeling to express here as many have felt this way...

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/22/06 02:45 AM
Ohhhh love feels so good don't it?
Very heart felt.