Topic: Caterpillar
Texas_69's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:03 PM
"My strangely looking friend, what a queer looking fellow you are.
To see you squirm around, I tend to wonder about your life.
You must be content to move about my garden, eating
my plants.
But that is only a fleeing moment.
Soon you will evolve into a majestic butterfly.
But if faith conspired against you, your life would briefly
end.
Oh, to see the inhumanity of you being impaled and displayed,
for someone mere enjoyment frighten me.
My strangely looking friend, moments are fleeing;
faith has conspired against you."

bigsmile

ladyblack67's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:04 PM
caterpillar!!! (I'm scared of them)

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:04 PM
flowerforyou

timmyschillin's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:05 PM
I don't get it. Are you killing caterpillars? lol

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:05 PM
This may not have been what you were after... but I saw some strange paralells between Jesus and the butterfly... "faith" has conspired against you... being impaled and displayed...

I dunno.

I liked it though. Good job.

otterman's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:07 PM
good write but do you have sumpin gainst butterflies?drinker drinker

timmyschillin's photo
Wed 02/27/08 12:08 PM

This may not have been what you were after... but I saw some strange paralells between Jesus and the butterfly... "faith" has conspired against you... being impaled and displayed...

I dunno.

I liked it though. Good job.


Good call, I didn't see that.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 05:44 PM
Nice write! Welcome to the poetry section of JSH!
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