Topic: rebuild
iraceslowcars's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:59 AM
Rebuild
by Ron H.

I burned through all of my desire
My heart was tempered by the fire
The outside looks as black as coal
The inside still is beautiful

You’d think that I would have learned
Once I knew that all had burned
Though the smoke has not yet cleared
I’m looking for more fuel

There are some scars that will not heal
And stabs of pain I’ll always feel
But maybe she can help me live
And rebuild me from within

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/18/08 07:03 AM
Edited by MsTeddyBear2u on Tue 03/18/08 07:04 AM
Nice write Race!
drinker

You know I think we are all a little char broiled in
life- some just a little more cooked than others! :wink:

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/18/08 08:31 AM
Nice write Ron!flowerforyou flowerforyou
Sounds like you may have found your happy again...:wink:

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:38 AM
At times we just have to scrape off as much of the burned part and move on life does get betterbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Tue 03/18/08 11:12 AM
Re-Building,, Ohhhhhhhhhhh ya I know this,,

Mmmmmmmmmmmm take a look do you see what I see, A gem in disguise,,, Lay down the Chisel and Live life,,, live to be happy live to love like no other,, Live to breathe.. Hmmmmmmm looking pretty good under the crust,,, bigsmile flowerforyou flowerforyou