Topic: "Feelings"
TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:10 PM
As I lay here upon the sand.
With my hand in your hand.
I think of all the past.
Could this one really last.
I tell you I'm here for the ride.
And I will always be by your side.
As we both look up towards the sky.
Then we look at each other eye to eye.
I know this sounds very bold.
But my heart is yours to hold.
It's hard to say should I dare.
To tell you that I really care.
As we look out upon the bay.
I'm lost for words to say.
I can't even look you in the eye.
So I just look back towards the sky.
As I sit here thinking could this be true.
Could it all be about me and you.
As we watch the waves come our way.
Knowing that it is the end of the day.
If only you would ask I could not lie.
It really does hurt when we say good by.

songbirrd's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:12 PM
that's really good Txs :)

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:14 PM
Heartfelt my friend.

:)

Morena350's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:14 PM
nice Txs, realy nice girl!!!!!

no photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:30 PM
awesome words gurly just awesome :)

slowtogetit's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:42 PM
wowwwwww gal, that was awesome......you do have a soft side.hhehehehe

Morena350's photo
Fri 01/05/07 10:02 PM
he,he, who else has a soft side huh?? slow? lol,lol!!

slowtogetit's photo
Fri 01/05/07 10:09 PM
MORENAAAAAAA shhhh don't tell anyone, i like being the insenitive
guy....lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/06/07 05:44 AM
Hey thanks everyone ya'll are all to kind !

Ohhhh and Slow shsssssssss no tell anyone I have a heart
it will ruin my rep.

Humm but then I see you seem to have one too reading the poetry section
lmao

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Sat 01/06/07 07:10 AM
WOW...Tx that was really deep! Love it!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 01/06/07 08:57 AM
I feel your words TXS...
Wonderful and true words they are!!!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/07/07 05:15 PM
Thanks everyone ohhhh by the way I have not been on
a beach or even seen a bay since I don't know when
just a poem lol

LAMom's photo
Sun 01/07/07 06:15 PM
Aw, txs very heart warming......

Noden's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:45 AM
Way to go Texanflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/04/08 07:37 AM
Hummm Noden you must be bored pulling them out of the basement I see bigsmile thank youflowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 02/04/08 11:50 AM
The beginning of January is the basement? Lord, I've been known to wander in the what Dungeons then.....

I'm glad she pulled it up. I hadn't read this one. Talk about True Grit :tongue:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/04/08 12:41 PM
Hummmm huhhh it is Jan 07 not 08 lmao laugh laugh laugh

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 02/04/08 12:48 PM
Whoops, joining you laugh laugh laugh

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 02/04/08 01:19 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/04/08 04:23 PM
Very nice write!:smile: