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As I lay here upon the sand.
With my hand in your hand. I think of all the past. Could this one really last. I tell you I'm here for the ride. And I will always be by your side. As we both look up towards the sky. Then we look at each other eye to eye. I know this sounds very bold. But my heart is yours to hold. It's hard to say should I dare. To tell you that I really care. As we look out upon the bay. I'm lost for words to say. I can't even look you in the eye. So I just look back towards the sky. As I sit here thinking could this be true. Could it all be about me and you. As we watch the waves come our way. Knowing that it is the end of the day. If only you would ask I could not lie. It really does hurt when we say good by. |
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that's really good Txs :)
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Heartfelt my friend.
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nice Txs, realy nice girl!!!!!
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awesome words gurly just awesome :)
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wowwwwww gal, that was awesome......you do have a soft side.hhehehehe
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he,he, who else has a soft side huh?? slow? lol,lol!!
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MORENAAAAAAA shhhh don't tell anyone, i like being the insenitive
guy....lol |
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Hey thanks everyone ya'll are all to kind !
Ohhhh and Slow shsssssssss no tell anyone I have a heart it will ruin my rep. Humm but then I see you seem to have one too reading the poetry section lmao |
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WOW...Tx that was really deep! Love it!
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I feel your words TXS...
Wonderful and true words they are!!! |
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Thanks everyone ohhhh by the way I have not been on
a beach or even seen a bay since I don't know when just a poem lol |
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Aw, txs very heart warming......
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Way to go Texan
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Hummm Noden you must be bored pulling them out of the basement I see
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The beginning of January is the basement? Lord, I've been known to wander in the what Dungeons then.....
I'm glad she pulled it up. I hadn't read this one. Talk about True Grit ![]() |
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Hummmm huhhh it is Jan 07 not 08 lmao
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Whoops, joining you
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Very nice write!
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