Topic: one of my poems
JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:20 PM
Just High

I want you to inspire
Disengage my every desire
make my pulsating braincells perspire
set me on fire
I want you to lay me beneath a tree
Quietly melodic as I can be
Lose my rythm happily
I want your colors
Purple sky
Euphoric sigh
color my world,
Incredible high
I want your soft winter shower
roll in the grass, pick a flower
taste the earth, both sweet and sour
and bask in the prisms, colored light
lay back, forget my plight
dream and gain rich insight
on black, on white
Forget this silly thing called "sense"
mine are far more immense
and my high is so much more intense
Take me with a colorfull chance
Enthrall me in your smoky dance

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:21 PM
smokin coolsmokin

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:22 PM
you like it

rarerose's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:24 PM
good job...i liked it flowerforyou

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:25 PM
thank you
i just wrote it down so i thought i would put it on here

Runpenzo's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:27 PM
Very not bad!!!

mssilverfox's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:28 PM
very different, I like :smile:

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:29 PM
lovely lyrical frenzy

bastet126's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:34 PM
very nice, thanks for the journey :wink:

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:37 PM
well im glad i could help lol
its just something i thought of

bastet126's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:42 PM

well im glad i could help lol
its just something i thought of


and that's were the best things start...from a thought.:smile:

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:48 PM
yup yup im trying to think of more
but now im drawing a blank

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:55 PM
Twisted

Tell me the words of the Insane...
If they spoke through your eyes...
Can you see the twisted?
Or the warnings coming for miles?
Tell me what the insane say...
No ones here and your sitting...
The insane linger in the shadows...
Do they speak?
Tell me the words of the insane...
When you cross that path...
Speak of the wise and righteous with true grace...
Tell me what the insane say...
If you do I'll listen to you...

bastet126's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:01 PM
say you ask?
how do they speak
when all words have lost meaning
the voices carry their souls
lost in the mist of euphoria
their laughter goes unheard

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:04 PM
Lullaby for the Insane:

Rock a by little one,
Don't close your eyes...
Look at me and don't cry.
I love you until you die...
Hush and calm down...
Little one...

Don't let those fears scare you.
Ignore the cries and say good-bye...
You're never forgotten here...
Look at the wall with nothing...
And look away as they prick you.

Calm down little one,
Don't scream out.
They will get you...
Until all is quiet.
Then you are gone...
Hush for now my little one...
And stare at nothing.

Don't struggle anymore.
You bang on the windows...
Screaming out for someone to help you...
Then you slide down...
Oh my,
I'm sorry I am not there...

Rest in peace little one,
Keep your head down.
I see you on the ground...
You are crying in your heart...
Talking to no one...
It will never change...

The end is near,
Now close your eyes...
As you sit in the small room.
Not understanding the world the same...
Good night forever my little dear...

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:12 PM
just another couple of poems i had saved on my computer

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/19/08 11:50 AM
Very good! drinker flowerforyou