Topic: tunnels
TheLonelyWalker's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:08 PM
Edited by TheLonelyWalker on Wed 03/19/08 07:16 PM
we walk our lives,
and we constantly
find ourselves walking
through tunnels.

we hope to see the light
at the end of the tunnel,
but most of the times
we can't see that light.

And when we finally see that light
our hearts are filled with joy.
Until finally we reach
the daylight again.

Sadly, this is just an illusion.
We keep on going, and
suddenly darkness all over.
Another dark and lone tunnel.

It's like a vicious circle.
A never ending enticement.
Light is given to us, so
it can be stolen again.

We keep walking with the hope
to see some light, but
we don't know where are we going
when all this is going to end.

We endure the heavy winds, and
we become stronger, but
others fall behind.
They are not strong enough.

Even the strongest ones
feel overwhelmed by
this uncertainty, this utopy
that we call life which
at the end is just
an endless web of tunnels.

TLW (03/19/08)

eileena9's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:09 PM
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sendingyoukisses's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:10 PM
very nice poem

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:11 PM
Ahhh, walker, you know that light is within and when you think the darkness will overwhelm, you unknowingly hit that switch..........

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 03/19/08 07:13 PM
excellent

TheLonelyWalker's photo
Wed 03/19/08 08:13 PM
thank u ladies and gentlemen

DTHRomeo's photo
Wed 03/19/08 08:15 PM
drinker

Muy bueno

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 03/20/08 04:47 AM
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(((TLW)))

frankfk's photo
Thu 03/20/08 05:35 AM
there r lots of memories attached with u bro to tunnels:wink: laugh flowerforyou
we walk our lives,
and we constantly
find ourselves walking
through tunnels.

we hope to see the light
at the end of the tunnel,
but most of the times
we can't see that light.

And when we finally see that light
our hearts are filled with joy.
Until finally we reach
the daylight again.

Sadly, this is just an illusion.
We keep on going, and
suddenly darkness all over.
Another dark and lone tunnel.

It's like a vicious circle.
A never ending enticement.
Light is given to us, so
it can be stolen again.

We keep walking with the hope
to see some light, but
we don't know where are we going
when all this is going to end.

We endure the heavy winds, and
we become stronger, but
others fall behind.
They are not strong enough.

Even the strongest ones
feel overwhelmed by
this uncertainty, this utopy
that we call life which
at the end is just
an endless web of tunnels.

TLW (03/19/08)

pkh's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:26 AM
very niceflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/20/08 08:01 AM
((((( Miguel ))))))

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TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/20/08 09:04 AM
Awww but we must find that light within first for others can not light our way. Once you find the light within then you will light up the path ahead.bigsmile

Noden's photo
Thu 03/20/08 12:52 PM
Next time bring a candle, oh wait maybe a flashlight, better yet build your own light
and never go down darkened tunnels


awwwh, beautiful write, Tallone

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