Topic: Felo de se
alonesaior's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:25 AM
Felo de se

The Sun spilled her glory unto the horizon,
waking all those to be awoken,
Warming all those to be awake,
chilled from the night.

With a faint smell of coffee beans,
A smile found its way upon my face.
How sweet the air taste,
How soft the ground felt.

the love birds song,
Coaxing me into a trance,
Rememboring the days,
To perfect to be true,
A care only for love,
Never wanting the tears,
The tears that came so few,
To perfect the day seemed,
Though how perfect,
It really was.


the sun rose to show her might,
to carry out her daily duties.
A smile found it way upon my face,
How perfect it was,
To see her rise,
once more.






(Felo de se means "Fellon of himself" to commit suicide back in early
English was considered a felon and a shameful death, hope you like this
better than my "A day to dream" and "a nights Disappointment." you look
the meaning at wikipedia.com, type in "felo de se" it should come up)

alonesaior's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:26 AM
Just one more thing, i just wrote this and posted it, i'm not a good
speller and missed some punctuation, please over look that. Thanks.

karmafury's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:27 AM
That was a truly wonderful read. Thank you.

alonesaior's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:29 AM
thanks, i'm trying to get back into writing. thanks a lot

catchme_ifucan's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:30 AM
that was very touching.. thank you!