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Topic: POETRY OF MY MIND
paterafan's photo
Tue 09/05/06 11:43 AM
I WANTED TO HEAR OTHER PEOPLES WRITINGS HERE ARE SOME OF MINE...

paterafan's photo
Tue 09/05/06 11:43 AM
ANOTHER DAY HAS PASSED,THE SUN HAS SET BEHIND THE MOUNTAINS ONCE MORE,I
SIT ALONE,LISTENING TO THE SILENT SCREAMS OF MY INSIDE.WONDERING IF IT
WILL EVER EASE,MY PASSING IN THIS LIFE HAS BEEN A COLD ONE.BOUND TO PAIN
EVERLASTING.
THE COOL AIR DRAPES IN AROUND ME
AS I DRIFT IN THIS FOG,
LOST ONCE MORE TO THE AGONY OF MY DYING HEART,
DRIFTING QUIETLY THROUGH THE WORLD OF SHADOW.
I GO BY UNOTICED,WITHERED WITHIN MY SHELL,
WILL THE WARMTH EVER SHINE ON MY FACE AGAIN?
OBSCURED FROM MY REACH,AT THE END OF MY DESPERATE PATH IT AWAITS ME.
THE ONE THING I CANNOT REACH.
I WALK ON SENTENCED TO MY HOLLOW SHELL.
SEARCHING FOR THE ONE TOUCH,
THAT WILL SET ME FREE FROM THIS HELL.
BUT IT DOESNT COME.
I FEEL THE RAIN FALL DOWN
DRENCHING MY COLD LIFELESS HEART.
SEARCHING FOR THE WAY OUT,
THE ONE PATH I CANNOT FIND.
IT IS COLD HERE,
NO FEELING,
NO PROMISES TO BE KEPT,
AS I WALK THROUGH THE VALLEY OF DESPAIR.
WAKE ME FROM THIS PLACE,
I SCREAM ALOUD,
BUT IT GOES UNHEARD ,
IN THIS EMPTY PLACE,
BOUND TO THESE CHAINS,
THAT DIG INTO MY SOUL.

paterafan's photo
Tue 09/05/06 11:46 AM
I WOKE UP TODAY FEELING HOLLOW INSIDE,THE LONELINESS IS CREEPING BACK
IN,I CAN FEEL MY MIND TURN, SPIRALING INTO MY SULLEN PLACES,IM BACK HERE
AGAIN,TO THE ALL TO FAMILIAR PLACE OF ALONE.NOBODY WALKS BESIDE ME AS I
TREAD THROUGH THIS COLD WORLD.
DRAGGING PAIN THAT WILL NEVER LEAVE ME,
IT IS MY COMPANION,
BOUND AGAIN TO ITS CHAIN.
PULLING THE WEIGHT OF PROMISES LEFT BROKEN,
I MOVE THROUGH THE LAND OF DARK WATERS,
LOST IN THE POOLS OF DESPAIR.
NEVER TO FIND MY LOVE,
THAT WILL NEVER COME.
I WALK ON,
SHROUDED IN A CLOAK OF LONELINESS,
TREADING ONWARD DOWN THE PATH OF COLD SOFTNESS,
NEVER TO BE FOUND.
A PATH I HAVE CHOSEN,
NO SOUL ,
NO MIND,
ONLY HOLLOW WALLS,
NEVER TO BE BROKEN BY ANOTHER,
I BELONG TO NO ONE,
THEY WILL NOT SEE ME,
BROKEN I HAVE BECOME,BOUND TO MY GREIF,
ALONE I SHALL WALK,
COLD EARTH BENEATH,
IN THE DARKNESS I WILL KEEP,
MY HEART IN CHAINS.
THE COLD RAIN RUNS DOWN MY FACE,SO NUMB

lionsbrew's photo
Tue 09/05/06 12:20 PM
thats very interesting i was never very good at poetry i right music all
the time but you definatly have a way with words

wonderman37's photo
Tue 09/05/06 04:06 PM
Lord Jesus
Without you my life has no meaning, no rymthe or reason.
Such living meaning less, just the will of sudden death.
So I shall praise you in the valleys and mountains.
Your love for us gives me strenght to tackle any battle.
Even when the odds are against me, with you I shall win
I thank you every day, for the renewal of strenght.
That shall carry me through every situration that arises.
Praying to you, for the courage that you gave to David.
I just hope, that I shall measure up to his love for you.
You are the beginning and the end to me, if i was to fail you.
Then please put me out of mymisery now and forever.
I know how I am nothing without you my wonderous King.

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Fri 09/08/06 04:44 AM
i find myself in darkness each and every night while the shadows dance
around me with a devilish delight although they know i'm not afraid
they'll try to take me home tonite, it's always a constant battle with
these demons that i see oh how they love for me to hear their twisted
thoughts to test the lords decree. yes they'd love to get their claws on
me and tear my soul to shreds but my mind is just too strong and they
will have to wait instead. i will set out to search for them like
occassionally in the past and even though i only want to play with them,
the lord wants me to stand fast. the day will come fast enough with ever
loving care so i must sit and wait while eating the despair. i have been
built for this and do not like waiting in the wings, the expectation
gets me hot as the demons gnash their teeth and i can smell the devils
scent upon me unlike i have in weeks. the demons grow emboldened as i
lose days of sleep i can see them in my yard and in the room that i
sleep.i see them on the downtown bus and in the corner store, i see them
in that strangers eyes and yearn to settle the score. i have my special
place within the blood covered walls but i am unsure if it is mine or
theirs that stain my coveralls. the day will come soon enuff when
everyone will have to decide and until that armegeddon, the demons will
lurk here by my side. they know not to get too close but they love to
engage my mind.

SteveJarvis's photo
Fri 09/08/06 04:57 AM
roses are red
violets are blue
I think roses are red
and some of them are blue

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Fri 09/08/06 05:01 AM
roses are purple and violets are red, i thought this shit was creeper
but it went right to my head

paterafan's photo
Fri 09/08/06 09:23 AM
YOU GUYS ARE FUNNY AS HELL!!

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Fri 09/08/06 04:08 PM
i can feel your anticipation deep down in my soul as i gaze into your
crystal eyes i feel that i am whole. you instantly knew that i was yours
when i wrapped my arms around you
the smell of your hair and heat of your love is all i want to know. i
desperately want to kiss you but cannot break this moment, i am lost in
your eyes, in your lips and can feel the warmth of both. i want to taste
your lips as softly and sweetly as the first time that you spoke to me
as i lean in alittle closer, i can feel my heart beat fast and if it
were up to me, forever it would last. i finally get a taste of your
moistened skin, knowing deep down in my heart
that i can never leave again---i love you

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Fri 09/08/06 04:41 PM
every time i see your face i gasp and wince in pain
it's been like this since the day you threw my heart away
i used to love you more than a single soul could bear
and now all i get from you is that cold and evil stare
i guess it's time to move ahead and leave you far behind
i'll pack my things and be out by noon to facilitate your removal from
my mind.
oh wait a minute,i do have one last thing to say
this is my house bitch so don't let the door hit you on your way lol
just kidding

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Fri 09/08/06 04:55 PM
here goes for all the ladies

It takes Someone Special to like a person like me.

I wonder when i will find my Special Someone to me.

For that person shall be Someone Special to me.

Like a Rose that is pretty and smells so good.

God please send the one for me.

Walking the floors every night wishing my true love will come to me.

So tired and alone will I ever find the one for me.


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Fri 09/08/06 05:02 PM
i'm walking through the desert on a hot and steamy day
and am not at my dealers house because i have seemed to lose my way
i have been seeing all types of things never experienced before
when a big brown beaver asked me to follow it through a door
i've never talked to a big brown beaver so i followed yes i did
when i entered into his room he wanted to buy a lid
turns out the guy just had buck teeth and i had just left my dealers
house. lmao

TiredOfBeingSingle's photo
Fri 09/08/06 05:06 PM
smokes here smokes gone going to start having to quit. puff puff pass
gave us both a coughing fit.
going back in forth till the blunt is gone. puff puff pass gittin higher
by the sec. smokin an puffin till the green is gone, going to start
again when the green is in hand

Dan:)'s photo
Fri 09/08/06 08:50 PM
Love is a faint dream of what it should be
So what do we see?
Is it a type of love we see or is it a desire that we want to set free
So what do we see in each others eyes that make us drop out of character
and not act ourselves.
Could it be the way your face looking in the moon light or what happen
last night.
I don't know what love actually feels like, but if it feel like this.
I know love really exists.

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Sat 09/09/06 02:21 AM
the nite is still and quiet with the smell of danger in the air
about the same time i hear her scream i feel someones fingers in my
hair. i can sense their presence even though i seem to be alone but the
LORD won't abandon me, with HIM i have a home
i can feel them circling me attempting to suvey their prey but the LORDS
good will and my lack of fear are keeping them at bay
they are eager to attack but decide to keep their distance, they know
that i'm not alone and they don't want resistence
the voices are getting louder in an attempt to draw me into the nite but
they know as well as i that i am always in the light
although i may suffer, i must remain fixed on my purpose
for i am being prepped for the final mission. i don't know when or where
it ends and the LORD will never tell
i must keep up the battle up to the very end
or else i'll be devoured and buried beneath my sin. some people are
built for battle and some are built for war, i don't know which one you
are or if you're one at all. i do know however that you have a place
reserved just beyond the gates, but that will be up to you because you
can afford the rates.
it doesn't take much at all to go the other way
all it will cost is your soul which they feed upon for your pay

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Sat 09/09/06 02:47 AM
i can hear you coming and i can smell your breath, your presence does
not scare me, i already reik of death
i thought i found my people but they belonged to you from the start i
refuse to mourn their passing, they seemed to lack the heart. i don't
believe you have it either and will disregard your wicked wail, you
thought that you were clever but you played yourself instead. to me you
are just a ho that i kick out of my bed, don't give into temptation
make the devil your bitch instead

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Sat 09/09/06 03:11 AM
Not Of Regular Mental Adequacy Level
normal people scare me, yes they truly do
not so much from what they say but what they really do
they seem to be more deficient than either me or you
i don't know if they're in denial or if they even know the difference.
should we even tell them or just take them fishin'
make them wear their helmet and put them on the bus
take them all out to the lake and see if they can find us

lionsbrew's photo
Sat 09/09/06 12:15 PM
there once was a man from jarass
whos balls were constructed of brass
when the both clanged together
they played stormy weather
and lightning shot out of his ass

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Sat 09/09/06 02:15 PM
i have seen you on the dance floor and cannot get you off my mind, don't
even know your name but i think about you all the time.
i would like to kiss your body and explore the corners of your mind, i
know that i will have you it's just a matter of time.
i know i must be patient and let life just run it's course
but i really want to know you and connect with you the most.
i cannot even wait sometimes for these dreams to become fruition,
seeking out your heart has become my life's sole mission

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