Topic: Empty
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Fri 03/28/08 04:43 PM
Walking through these pages
Through the ages
Walking on through...running
Empty pages...stunning
Turn the page stumble rage
Emptiness in my face with every page
Nothing there, not to care
Of the ages,through the pages
Empty faces, Glances so glazen
Frozen on the faces
Quickly turn another page
Running now with quickened pace
Face to face with your ghost
I cannot trace
Cannot face,repalce,embrace
All the ages, all the rages
All the blank pages
Your ghost still rages
Through me completely
Trickery played upon me
See not what i see
But only what you show me
Feel not empty frozen rage
But what i once felt
Seems like ages and pages ago
For with this ghost i have delt
But now and then..remember when
Emptiness invaded me
And i could no longer see
The light in front of me


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Fri 03/28/08 04:50 PM
Liked that one :smile:

kc0003's photo
Fri 03/28/08 06:20 PM
tracing ghost leads to frustration
better to let them haunt others

i really liked this one
nicely done

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Fri 03/28/08 11:31 PM
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Sat 03/29/08 08:28 AM
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Sat 03/29/08 09:40 AM
:cry: Good read Jen, Now feel thisbigsmile bigsmile
Memories leave us 100 times slower, than when we made them..
Great POEM,wink...:heart: