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Topic: pen's soliloquy
bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 07/28/12 02:42 PM
pen's soliloquy in between the pages within the words just before the ink dries. much like the newness of a spring day. alive. and vibrant radiates inside all the colors of the wildflower field. oh how the sunflower's seductive song soothes a wanton heart. kisses, succulent on forever lips and newborn petals growing, whisper. delicately, softly, spilling into letters. ~ks 2012

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 07/28/12 04:33 PM
Awesome write.....

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 07/28/12 04:59 PM
In between the pages, within the words...A wonderful place to be...Thanks for taking me there..

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sat 07/28/12 05:12 PM
In between the pages, within the words...A wonderful place to be...Thanks for taking me there.. Your writes so rare, and yet they do indeed write between the lines, I adore your words

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 07/28/12 05:40 PM
thank you leigh, sometimes it is through the journey of others, that allows us to go there. :) poppa, adoration goes both ways, danke Up2, from you, that means a lot, thank you!

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 07/28/12 06:23 PM
Beautiful Bastet write I love to read..I adore the word Soliloguoy..

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 07/28/12 06:29 PM
nice, but while i'm here, i'm still waiting!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 07/29/12 04:32 AM


bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 07/29/12 12:50 PM
ainjel i love that word too! kc, this is what i do while i wait around for one of your writes :) thank you! tazz,

laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112	Sun 07/29/12 02:36 PM
Love your writes Bastet...even if I have to look up a word now and again...thank you!!!!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 07/29/12 04:39 PM
Love your writes Bastet...even if I have to look up a word now and again...thank you!!!! haha! thanks laura, it's good to see you here again! :)

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Mon 07/30/12 01:22 AM
ah thanks bas for the inspiration to write something new. Love your writes

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/30/12 01:25 AM
happy ink dribbles on the sheets to some they are blots natural scenes or obscenity curvy or straight incarnations of a local dialect or foreign tongue vicious in exact assessment softly descriptive never escaping the hand of their creator nonetheless infectiously affecting everyone else now she is also mine as I am hers dripping with ink

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 07/30/12 06:16 PM
ah thanks bas for the inspiration to write something new. Love your writes mig, thank you, you know i am a fan of yours, big time!! :)

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 07/30/12 06:17 PM
happy ink dribbles on the sheets to some they are blots natural scenes or obscenity curvy or straight incarnations of a local dialect or foreign tongue vicious in exact assessment softly descriptive never escaping the hand of their creator nonetheless infectiously affecting everyone else now she is also mine as I am hers dripping with ink sometimes rushed to jot it all down like a flood pouring letters all jumbled and such sometimes with care as if cautioned upstream we pause and we edit with a slowhand, touch :) nice. ty for reading and ...writing!!

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 07/31/12 01:52 AM
obviously I enjoyed your poem and found it inspiring!