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Topic: The Proposal
tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Mon 08/06/12 03:47 PM Edited by tayah12 on Mon 08/06/12 03:48 PM
He's asking her to take his name The worlds pausing Her eyes widening Heart pounding Breathe stalling Thoughts racing World spiraling Stars falling Dreams fading Life changing She realized she can not take his name The worlds pausing His eyes narrowing Heart braking Voice rising Blood boiling Glasses shattering Demons raging Hell firing Dreams burning Life changing

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 08/06/12 04:23 PM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 08/06/12 05:19 PM
Oh my your talented...... Excellent write.....

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 08/06/12 06:17 PM
Hello Tay!....Really enjoyed this, it's fresh!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 08/06/12 06:38 PM
niice!! welcome and keep sharing these gems! :)

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 08/07/12 05:58 AM


mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Tue 08/07/12 01:43 PM
Seem like there's another excellent poet in our midst . . . nice write, very fluid.

laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112	Tue 08/07/12 08:49 PM
Been there...problem is I keep doing it. Thanks for the outcome reminder...very nice write!

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Tue 08/07/12 10:22 PM
Thank you everyone. Reading your pieces have really inspired me.

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