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Ive been working on this poem now for few months its called “WITH” but Im stuck for more lines with continuity. I was wondering if anyone is willing to help me out with bit of creativity. Of course any worthwhile poem has to have certain amount of words per line and this one consists of six. Hint
 With! With your picture laying beside me with a notepad of borrow rhymes, with cold tears on my pillow with sad songs filling my heart with so many regrets that subsume with so may plans ending that day with or without you I lay awake |
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Ive been working on this poem now for few months its called “WITH” but Im stuck for more lines with continuity. I was wondering if anyone is willing to help me out with bit of creativity. Of course any worthwhile poem has to have certain amount of words per line and this one consists of six. Hint With! With your picture laying beside me with a notepad of borrow rhymes, with cold tears on my pillow with sad songs filling my heart with so many regrets that subsume with so may plans ending that day with or without you I lay awake with so many thoughts on your head  
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End it at that, honestly.
Of course I'm looking at it as the power it can hold, the questions it can raise...The doubt. Doubt is a powerful emotion, I believe, and anything that can put it in us is absolutely necessary...The way it is. |
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I'd end it "With or without you".
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I've cried alone. well been there in mind an died alone. Brain is kinda gone. was is claimed is flimsy like Styro-foam. Yr hate is near. **** a debate near the end of the year. a single tear can dictate everything from visual fears. plz leave me be. I'm Sry That yr eyes r unable to see. Fixtate on t.v an feel the pain when they tell u to grieve. A simple deed. Between follwing an a seargent that leads. Well its jus a tease autumn breeze for u to concieve
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Ive been working on this poem now for few months its called “WITH” but Im stuck for more lines with continuity. I was wondering if anyone is willing to help me out with bit of creativity. Of course any worthwhile poem has to have certain amount of words per line and this one consists of six. Hint With! With your picture here beside me With a notepad of borrow rhymes, With cold tears on my pillow With nothing to kill but time... With sad songs filling my heart With so many regrets that subsume With all plans ending that day With sad thoughts my mind consumed... With or without I lie awake With or without your love forsake With or without my heart breaks With or without give or take...  |
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Without u I crumble below without u I have no love left to show. with out me none of this woulda been cuz with out me an end can't begin ?? Idk
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Ive been working on this poem now for few months its called “WITH” but Im stuck for more lines with continuity. I was wondering if anyone is willing to help me out with bit of creativity. Of course any worthwhile poem has to have certain amount of words per line and this one consists of six. Hint With! With your picture here beside me With a notepad of borrow rhymes, With cold tears on my pillow With nothing to kill but time... With sad songs filling my heart With so many regrets that subsume With all plans ending that day With sad thoughts my mind consumed... With or without I lie awake With or without your love forsake With or without my heart breaks With or without give or take... Just the type of lines Ive been looking for 
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