Topic: Needs to be discussed
MrqsC's photo
Sat 11/24/12 12:12 AM
Life is my death
And Death is my life
Fold my arms across my chest
No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest




NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that ****

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Sat 11/24/12 12:22 AM
Change the word 'death' to 'love' and you got it right..

Queene123's photo
Sat 11/24/12 12:44 AM

Life is my death
And Death is my life
Fold my arms across my chest
No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest




NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that ****



adding to your poem

Life is my death
and love is my life
as i tend to fold
my arms across my chest
no matter if i can look
for my soul will lay
upon ones hands
as my love shall
continue
in one heart and soul

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Sat 11/24/12 05:21 AM

Life is my death
And Death is my life
Fold my arms across my chest
No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest




NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that ****


I get it and you....Life is finite, death infinite....The body is just a temporary resting place for the soul which, after death, moves on and sees all...Nice job Mr. C...Welcome! bigsmile

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Sun 11/25/12 03:01 AM
To the point.. inevitable reality for some.. I like your style.. good write