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Topic: ~ its in the hanging
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 01/21/13 08:19 AM
i keep layering sins i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 01/21/13 08:23 AM
Sweet!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 01/21/13 08:24 AM


Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Mon 01/21/13 12:56 PM
i keep layering sins i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure awwwww love

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 01/21/13 05:11 PM
Leigh2154....kind! tazzops... Zimzane2....awwwww...

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Mon 01/21/13 06:08 PM
You hooked me by the first line. This is amazing.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 01/21/13 07:45 PM
plastic_pancakes....& im pleased by what you left me.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 01/21/13 08:26 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 01/21/13 10:43 PM
loveit...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 01/22/13 05:20 AM
kc0003.... Ainjel...awesome!

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Tue 01/22/13 09:58 AM
Nice write TB

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Tue 01/22/13 09:44 PM
i keep layering sins i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure Now this is poetry . . . I truly love this one!!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/23/13 05:14 AM
penny281....thankyou... mig25.... you are generous...

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 01/23/13 05:26 AM
I love the way you expressed the complexity of how love works with such tender simplicity, teasing.. waiting to be undone... really cool...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/23/13 06:22 PM Edited by Teditis on Wed 01/23/13 06:25 PM
'tis awesome indeed... one of yer best.(imho) But take it from a pro... someone who over thinks everything, try this mindset instead (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PV3864aqAr0) Not me, of course... I meant "him"; it's not in the "hanging"... it's in the hanging around (wondering).

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 01/24/13 01:31 PM
AthenaRose2...and i thankyou for reading... Teditis...color me surprised...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Fri 01/25/13 12:58 PM
AthenaRose2...and i thankyou for reading... Teditis...color me surprised... Haha, No. I'll color you B&W with pink highlights... just as you present.

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