About Her:

Ever since i found you my life has been in a total disarray


i didnt know what was okay would have been great


had the greatness been achieved maybe we would have been better


but i didnt make the most out of the opportunity and if i did


i would still have regrets





What i said is many thoughts expressed at once

deeper than one point of view

proves

a multitude of perspectives accrued


let me rephrase that


a variable amount of introspectives introduced




About Me:

Ever since i found you my life has been in a total disarray


i didnt know what was okay would have been great


had the greatness been achieved maybe we would have been better


but i didnt make the most out of the opportunity and if i did


i would still have regrets





Depending on what you see perceived

is how you will view one side of this poetry


poeticaly


rehetoricaly


metaphoricaly


a poem about her, about me, about poetry



In other words



About this Poem:

Ever since i found you my life has been in a total disarray


i didnt know what was okay would have been great


had the greatness been achieved maybe we would have been better


but i didnt make the most out of the opportunity and if i did


i would still have regrets





Albert Einstein's theory

"Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results."


An alteration of Albert Einstein's theory

"Sanity: saying the same thing over and over again and expecting different results."

good one, d4tc.. message received... insanity still intact and being nurtured as we speak... love what you did with this piece...

Reading you is like a breath of the freshest sea air! ...Clean, pure, original...

nicely done...J

Fantastic...

thank you

2km
Ainjel
kc
Leigh
Athena

I'm not sure i totally understand
but i like it !
Ponderous and enjoyable
Great writing

like,like,like

like it dear