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Topic: Rating please, text rewritten
SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Sun 11/10/13 07:45 AM
Boy, this is scary, worse than the first time I asked scared , hihi, but I'd like to ask for feedback. Mainly the text, as I wrote a new profile text yesterday. But feedback on piccies is okay too.

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Sun 11/10/13 08:28 AM
I like b(@)(@)bs...?
smitten

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Sun 11/10/13 08:31 AM
Your new pics are very lovely. And your new text is really good. It's ironic, I told someone the other day that I hadn't seen a perfect profile yet, but I think you've written it.

Very conversational, draws you in, makes you want to read til the end. Tells what you're like and what you're interested in.

Good job, I hope you find your perfect match.flowerforyou

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:27 AM

Your new pics are very lovely. And your new text is really good. It's ironic, I told someone the other day that I hadn't seen a perfect profile yet, but I think you've written it.

Very conversational, draws you in, makes you want to read til the end. Tells what you're like and what you're interested in.

Good job, I hope you find your perfect match.flowerforyou

Wow, thank you!
blushing flowerforyou

@ Kik, what have boobs got to do with rating my profile? spock
( :laughing: )

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Sun 11/10/13 09:34 AM
Edited by KiK2me on Sun 11/10/13 10:25 AM


Your new pics are very lovely. And your new text is really good. It's ironic, I told someone the other day that I hadn't seen a perfect profile yet, but I think you've written it.

Very conversational, draws you in, makes you want to read til the end. Tells what you're like and what you're interested in.

Good job, I hope you find your perfect match.flowerforyou

Wow, thank you!
blushing flowerforyou

@ Kik, what have boobs got to do with rating my profile? spock
( :laughing: )


I don't know...
I was just making sure everyone knows that i like b(@)(@)bs....
SHEESH....

:laughing:

Your profile looks good ...
flowerforyou

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Sun 11/10/13 12:00 PM
Edited by KiK2me on Sun 11/10/13 12:01 PM
:cry:


Dean's photo
Mon 11/11/13 06:45 PM
Your profile is great!! You cover the basics and the pics are great to.. Please rate mine!

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Mon 11/11/13 06:48 PM
Well done. A man would be a fool to pass you up casually.

PacificStar48's photo
Mon 11/11/13 09:09 PM
Well you had already impressed me with your posts in forums but the profile is well done also.

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Mon 11/11/13 09:25 PM
Profile looks good:smile: . I just hope you don't too much pervs, who got the wrong idea when you mentioned you write erotic stories.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Tue 11/12/13 03:27 AM
Thank you all
flowerforyou

Melissa, not had any pervs yet, knock on wood, tongue2 I had my doubts about putting that in myself, but if need be I can change it.
I'm also writing a story on my time with the Aboriginal ppl, book on spiritual gardening, workshops for intuitive development etc.
So most of my writings are informative and serious subjects smile2

@ Kik, why are you crying?

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Tue 11/12/13 03:37 AM
Now,you mean to tell me Fairies can write/type??
Next; a copy of them please!
Then; don't roast those fingers Crystal!!
Ha ha haaaa

Well,I think you are a good writer-i enjoyed reading profile!

But hey,I already thought you are great from the posts!

All the best for that"boy" who can talk!!
Profile is a 10!

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Tue 11/12/13 04:15 AM

Now,you mean to tell me Fairies can write/type??
Next; a copy of them please!
Then; don't roast those fingers Crystal!!
Ha ha haaaa

Well,I think you are a good writer-i enjoyed reading profile!

But hey,I already thought you are great from the posts!

All the best for that"boy" who can talk!!
Profile is a 10!

I'm a modern fairy tongue2
A copy wouldn't do you much good, it's in Dutch :angel:
The only thing I write in English is my blog, here on the forums and sometimes on my FB as I got a number of UK friends.
Thanks for your feedback
flowers

Toks88's photo
Tue 11/12/13 05:31 AM
Nice one. You look so pretty. Nice pics.

Kush420sd's photo
Tue 11/12/13 06:02 AM
Hey ladies

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Tue 11/12/13 06:35 AM

Thank you all
flowerforyou

Melissa, not had any pervs yet, knock on wood, tongue2 I had my doubts about putting that in myself, but if need be I can change it.
I'm also writing a story on my time with the Aboriginal ppl, book on spiritual gardening, workshops for intuitive development etc.
So most of my writings are informative and serious subjects smile2

@ Kik, why are you crying?


On the plus side, most of the pervs I've known weren't big on reading, so you should be good. They "just like to look at the pictures."laugh

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Tue 11/12/13 07:48 AM


Thank you all
flowerforyou

Melissa, not had any pervs yet, knock on wood, tongue2 I had my doubts about putting that in myself, but if need be I can change it.
I'm also writing a story on my time with the Aboriginal ppl, book on spiritual gardening, workshops for intuitive development etc.
So most of my writings are informative and serious subjects smile2

@ Kik, why are you crying?


On the plus side, most of the pervs I've known weren't big on reading, so you should be good. They "just like to look at the pictures."laugh

You trying to tell me I don't score high on pictures?grumble grumble
(Hahahahaha)

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Tue 11/12/13 08:41 AM



Thank you all
flowerforyou

Melissa, not had any pervs yet, knock on wood, tongue2 I had my doubts about putting that in myself, but if need be I can change it.
I'm also writing a story on my time with the Aboriginal ppl, book on spiritual gardening, workshops for intuitive development etc.
So most of my writings are informative and serious subjects smile2

@ Kik, why are you crying?


On the plus side, most of the pervs I've known weren't big on reading, so you should be good. They "just like to look at the pictures."laugh

You trying to tell me I don't score high on pictures?grumble grumble
(Hahahahaha)


I meant they wouldn't ask to read the erotica, because most pervs don't like to, or aren't very good at, reading.laugh

Your pics are really pretty.flowerforyou

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Tue 11/12/13 08:55 AM

Boy, this is scary, worse than the first time I asked scared , hihi, but I'd like to ask for feedback. Mainly the text, as I wrote a new profile text yesterday. But feedback on piccies is okay too.
you have a good command of english and that description so captivating to read.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Tue 11/12/13 09:03 AM


Boy, this is scary, worse than the first time I asked scared , hihi, but I'd like to ask for feedback. Mainly the text, as I wrote a new profile text yesterday. But feedback on piccies is okay too.
you have a good command of english and that description so captivating to read.

Thank you, Kat, on both accounts
flowerforyou

@ Paintecards, it was just a joke, hahaha
flowers

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