Topic: Freedom
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Thu 07/24/14 10:01 PM
Edited by Unknow on Thu 07/24/14 10:02 PM
Sitting against J. Hopkins tombstone, a late 1700s freed slave. To my left lies his wife Ella, God she sure was brave

At my feet are the headstones, of all her babies graves.

I'm watching a bat dance against the dusks, pink yellow white and blue twilight sky

I can feel its anticipation, as i'm sure it can feel mine.

There's a owl hooting, in the woods not far from me. I can hear it in his voice, he knows we'll soon be free

But not for the day birds, in their prison they will sleep.

As the frogs and crickets chirps, comes from what seem to be all around. The sky begins to blacken, as i lay my white candle down

The deer grazing in the field, celebrate without a sound.

Now i light my candle, whos light the headstones seem to bar. I thank God for the country sky, that boast so many stars. But no i'm still not free, no not thus far

AAH theres my freedom, as i reach for my guitar W.A.M.

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Fri 07/25/14 07:13 AM
reading your words I could see it all.flowerforyou

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Fri 07/25/14 08:23 AM
Thank you

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Fri 07/25/14 10:17 AM
This is so beautiful, but my only comment would be that I don't think the punchline fits it at all.

I also don't comment on most of the things I read. I enjoy your cadence.

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Fri 07/25/14 11:23 AM
Awesome write on so many levels. smokin

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Fri 07/25/14 02:12 PM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 07/25/14 02:16 PM
Thank you plastic pancakes I appreciate your feedback
Thank you up2us that made my day blushing

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Sat 07/26/14 07:19 PM
Welcome back old friend..:smile: :smile:

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Sun 07/27/14 05:33 AM
Thank you and welcome back to you too. I hope life is treating you well. flowers

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Tue 09/23/14 09:35 AM
flowerforyou beautiful

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Tue 09/23/14 09:44 AM

Sitting against J. Hopkins tombstone, a late 1700s freed slave. To my left lies his wife Ella, God she sure was brave

At my feet are the headstones, of all her babies graves.

I'm watching a bat dance against the dusks, pink yellow white and blue twilight sky

I can feel its anticipation, as i'm sure it can feel mine.

There's a owl hooting, in the woods not far from me. I can hear it in his voice, he knows we'll soon be free

But not for the day birds, in their prison they will sleep.

As the frogs and crickets chirps, comes from what seem to be all around. The sky begins to blacken, as i lay my white candle down

The deer grazing in the field, celebrate without a sound.

Now i light my candle, whos light the headstones seem to bar. I thank God for the country sky, that boast so many stars. But no i'm still not free, no not thus far

AAH theres my freedom, as i reach for my guitar W.A.M.


So powerful, these words of yours!flowers