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Edited by
SunnyMcleod
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Thu 06/11/09 09:14 PM
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How can someone who is chronically late have perfect timing?
The miles and days separate us but when the need is there, you are With words of love and comfort Words, sarcastic, teasing and kind Always the first to admit to a longing we both feel But both know how unlikely it will be fulfilled You and I have both moved passed this Knowing it is not over Knowing it probably never will be Friends like us never forget Because we will always be friends Or more than that It’s hard for me to tell But no one in the world can look at us and say different No matter how much of a whirlwind I am Or how much silent plotting you do In the end It all comes down to you Sunny 11/06/09 |
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 Awwwwwwww!!
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Awwwwwwww!!
 TY
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How can someone who is chronically late have perfect timing? The miles and days separate us but when the need is there, you are With words of love and comfort Words, sarcastic, teasing and kind Always the first to admit to a longing with both feel But both know how unlikely it will be fulfilled You and I have both moved passed this Knowing it is not over Knowing it probably never will be Friends like us never forget Because we will always be friends Or more than that It’s hard for me to tell But no one in the world can look at us and say different No matter how much of a whirlwind I am Or how much silent plotting you do In the end It all comes down to you Sunny 11/06/09
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.............just.............. wow
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*sigh*
This sht still hurts 
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Reminds me of the John Mayer song "Back To You"....
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I love that song...
I'm glad I wrote it though. At least it's out there for everyone to see even if he can't 
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How can someone who is chronically late have perfect timing? The miles and days separate us but when the need is there, you are With words of love and comfort Words, sarcastic, teasing and kind Always the first to admit to a longing we both feel But both know how unlikely it will be fulfilled You and I have both moved passed this Knowing it is not over Knowing it probably never will be Friends like us never forget Because we will always be friends Or more than that It’s hard for me to tell But no one in the world can look at us and say different No matter how much of a whirlwind I am Or how much silent plotting you do In the end It all comes down to you Sunny 11/06/09 Perfect. Simple and too the point, you didn't use imagery or descriptive words but you held that simplistic method through the entire piece. Change nothing, this is fine as it is.
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Thanks Fear
This is one of my favourites I've done. Because it's so simple. I like simple sometimes.
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