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Unattended Garden
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 (((Kevin))) This is amazing!!!
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My Hero
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This ROCKS Beans!!!
 To you and your mom!!!
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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This castle
it stands in tatters and massive disrepair but within it lives a family broken yet loving you see they truly care There is Uncle Abra down in the tunnels with his studies and yarns that amaze he sings his songs and tells his tales as he giggles at our questions of disbelief A man a friend and brother D4TC so deep in the garden of life and passion his thoughts and words tell stories giving life to grown things thorns petals sweetness sorrow life take a walk with him and see through eyes no longer closed DaveyB is glue friend father brother no matter here giving host to patience love prosperity individuality naked thought bare emotion raw passion his travels wide his heart dear gentle alone haunting the halls for all to hear his passing Auntie Wench strong silent type trying to hold her tongue let go share it don't spare it yourself for another give in live allow you counsel and care you're there here giving life love through self helping those hurting showing through words softly spoken loudly heard like glue the bond of us perfectly given strength S1owhand where are you? the man of so few words quiet reserved heard near the gates waiting watching giving birth to thought allowing entrance to those willing loving deserving showing kindness giving laughter praise understanding feeling through knowing contemplating fast then slowing Tanyaann dark cousin sharing knowledge of things not seen not blinded the dark side the moon in her room shining brightly giving voice awake not resting she breaths strength sharing those things swept under the rug hiding not wanting to be seen thank her reality escape not here Myself a sister short of a brother full of joy broken heart barely living giving what peace this place broken together whole speaking through eyes not seeing my heart right sleeve don't poke it I bleed caring so much of others forgetting of self walking nay talking the garden the halls the dungeon tower moat flower bridge and walls home love my family my friends my all That wasn't what I intended to write but I think you all have had moments where the pen was mightier than the intention. This is what came forth when I started thinking of all of you so this is what was meant to be. I love each and every one of you and thank you for being this family that is so important to me!!! MUCH LOVE |
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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My thanks to all of you that have visited!!! Without each of you this place and this castle would not be possible! Please keep writing and lend to this place a bit of yourself and to us a bit of a twist in our lives...
With all that said I guess it is my turn to add to this castle of sorts... 
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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Only the beginning, 3 down, 4 to go with innumerably more who grace this place. Through the mists of minds In a parallel time, I stumbled upon the gate. A drawbridge of sorts, Lifting with chuckles and snorts Revealed a glow, which beckoned me in. With an excited puppy wriggle, And a few nervous giggles, I happily scampered inside. The medieval sight Of a debonair knight Blinded my senses to all else. Then like magic he shifted, “Abracadabra”, he wheezed in a whisper, “feel free to explore at your whim.” Then a door creaked I looked up, as a face peaked Through the iron railing above. He howled with glee, “Just to your right, you silly, Climb those stairs and step up to me. Or use your mind If you don’t mind that type of exercise And fly up, toot sweet!” With no thought in my brain, But to join him and maintain My sanity ------ Whoooosh, up I went Suspended in mid air in front of him. “How do I land?” He laughed, “Just think stand!” I did and my feet eased to the floor. He said, “I’m D4, Words and life, I explore, Welcome to Castle Pen.” Castle Pen? An odd name. He then explained, “We’re a family of writers. We each have our oddities As well as our specialties And sometimes keep to our own den. Hence, we are withheld And released Through some form of a pen.” With a deep courtly bow, He vanished and I wondered, “what now?” Then entered the room he had left. Ohhhh, my soul be blessed I had entered a nest Of pictures gracing the walls. Graphic memories they stirred And beneath them were words Of a path walker’s attest. Lost in a picture, I barely heard a throat clear And turned to look for the source. A gentle smile under Eyes filled with wonder Met my startled gaze. “Pray, do take a seat Your heart’s discombobulated in beat, As the pulse at your throat doth portray. This“------with a wide sweep of his hand----- “Is my Gallery and I’m DaveyB; I think it the best in the land.” “Have you been all these places With these the outward faces Of emotions held deeply inside?” With a sharp look and deep sigh DaveyB slowly replied, “I will tell you this, You curious miss Whose thoughts innocently pry. If you look real deep Inside this keep, The master kiln’s man you’ll find.” Goose bumps up my arms crawled, As he leaned on and then faded into the wall; “Oy vay,” I exclaimed, “this place is a treat!” “Treat, retreat, repeat” I strolled out the door Mumbling, “out of my head D4.” (((WENCH)))  LOVE THIS!!!! Can't wait to see the rest of this and take it all in! |
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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they looked up to it - unsure - exactly what it was in their pedalish/pedalized faces walled it around pollen different shades us gracious - it looked amazed - placed grand amongst them - however when - when it was insight they see see not they swayed hi bye the winds - stem - sway stems - of it all families and friends - they just couldn't believe it - and yet the yet of it allowed them to believe - it - that - this was not one of them - amongst them maybe somethin greater viewed from down here hear spying up the flowers moved by its living powers - thorny by nature - protection from its creator - grounded - richly soiled the flowers nicewhile - around a castle - could see one big sign meanwhile - amongst familes friends - whoever however - whenever whyever? - whatevers - BRIGHTER - a sun - the sun - seeing one that kills - the shinning - too much to see - the sun - down on the flowers shined - seems less seamless - so when it does shine - it shines - 57 classy clean chevy rims SHINE - uuw aah - ooh - an old wine - un cork - duh - well - sore - duh - does the less - bright - moon shine - HERE - hear! - amongst a castle it has no idea what it does - the flowers - for the flowers - grow up next to a castle - living - unsure exactly what it is - in all its greatness - the sun - the rain - the flowers - they'll soak it up n in - in any ways they can (((J)))  You sir are the white rose at the center of the garden!!!
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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The Family Within The Castle As she walks in the garden, She allows her fingers To brush the dew from the petals. She feels a part of eyes Burning through her bodice. As she looks up she knows immediately Who it is. Her creepy uncle Fredrick. There is a reason he is locked in that tower. And she is glad that he is there! As she continues in the garden The bottom of her dress darkens With the collection of more dew. She happens upon the gardener. He lowers his eyes For he knows that she knows That he is having an affair with her mother. Going tired of the sexual perversion around her She heads up the cobblestone walk to the castle. Where she knows she can retreat to her room. As she enters the castle, she passes by her mother and father Walking hand in hand With the appears of the most perfect couple. With a greeting and a secret sigh She continues down the hall And nearly runs into her brother At the end of the winding marble staircase. He roughs up her hair And greets with in a masculine manner However, she knows that he is on his way To meet up with the Prince for a secret encounter. On her way up the stairs She hears the shreeks of her demented aunt. With a husband like hers no wonder she is crazy. Upon reaching her bedroom retreat She opens the worn cover of her fairytale escape And melts into her reality within the pages. Tanya 8-31-2009 HOLY SCHNIKEYS!!!! What a tale you have spun lady!!! That rocks! |
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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 Stormy clouds cast eerie shadows o'er the castle walls rousing the inhabitants to engage in poignant brawls Bothers and sisters battling in a heartless unyielding war refusing to sow the seeds of love for an amorous rapport The garden, in dreadful disarray, to shame the courtyard it adorns flowers choked by wicked weeds, and the roses have gone to thorns A glimmer of love still flickers in the glitter of their eyes like fleeting flashes of lightening that permeate the skies No one meant for this to be! It was never a decree! It came about by accident when they turned within to 'me' No thought of feelings for 'others' No empathy for their brothers They even have a hardened heart toward the women they know as their mothers Life has been taken for granted Now, it's every man for himself The sword of distrust has been drawn and compassion's been placed on the shelf The King is old and feeble though he prays for family peace The Queen is weeping sadly at the hatred that fills her niece How could the family have fallen apart? What happened to the days of old? When everyone loved with a selfless heart and no one acted so cold. Will the sunlight ever shine again? Will the clouds of despair ever wane? Will the family ever regain their love? Or is such a ambition in vain? Abra (August 31, 2009)  I can honestly say you're the one person that I didn't expect darkness from but I LOVE IT!!! (((James)))
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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Lurchs_sister, I have not seen you posts for ahile, have you been away? Started following some of yours when I first joined. Hey 2cool!  Thanks for asking about me! Nice to know that people really pay attention! Let's just say that I ahve been gone mentally for a bit. There have been a lot of things happening in my life and the poetry has just taken a back seat for a bit. The things that are happening are positive and so I haven't had as much time or needed an outlet so much... I guess that is a good thing. I've been feeling the need for a write lately though so keep watching and I will be back on these pages again soon. Thanks again and have a wonderful day!!!
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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Good to see you Tanya!!! Write your addition if you choose... it will be most welcomed and enjoyed!
 This goes for others as well! If you feel the urge after reading this please feel free to add your rendition of the crazy castle to the mix 
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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*clapping**clapping* That was great David!!!
I love the flow and the little giggle it gave me! Wench... minx?! Really now  Whatever floats yer boat in the moat dolly!!! Thanks for showing up Mirror!!!
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WARNING! KEEP OUT!
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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And now I see that MA and Maleah are gone so I'm adding DaveyB
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I'm calling you out!!! ;)
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This is a challenge for a few friends, all of whom I know are talented and can spin with the best of them!
DKOW d4tc ma_thompson s1owhand kc003 maleah Abracadabra I'm looking for a poem about a castle and a garden. We are all the inhabbitants and somehow we are a disfunctional family that loves eachother very much. Don't disappoint me!!!  And the gauntlet has been thrown!!! 
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nothing for something
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Yet another wrinkle to love (((J)))
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The Attic
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I especially like it since the attic was my room!
This holds a lot of meaning and I know the feeling of it as I too would sit there and think of days gone by and those yet to come. |
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The Attic
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This attic of yours
Is a magical place The memories inside Shine on your face The dust may fly In tiny shperes But it speaks loudly To listening ears Days gone by Are the ones you hold Remembering the lessons Many others told Yet here you sit So wanting to share Your future with another And so dearly care In time my friend This will come to you When it is time It will be forever true (((((David)))))
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Would it be wrong of me?????
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Let her loose Beans!!!
 Sometimes the thought of a little payback is sweet! 
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Rising and Falling
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Thanks (((MzEm)))
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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Wed 08/26/09 07:23 PM
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Thanks for sharing this and giving me a reason to cry!
Thank you also for what you do for us!!! PROUD OF YOU!!!
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