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Sun 08/12/12 03:29 PM


thanks for that, made me smile.


(((Rich)))...Do you have any idea how much I like you!!!bigsmile

Another one just for youflowerforyou

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Thank you for that Vicki,flowerforyou :heart:

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Sun 08/12/12 10:21 AM
thanks for that, made me smile.

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Sun 08/12/12 04:58 AM
subtle Mig.

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Sun 08/12/12 03:52 AM
thank you Ladywind and Scotti, kind words.

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Sat 08/11/12 07:27 AM
interesting write.

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Sat 08/11/12 07:22 AM
sad, i agree, seems a little lesson in there maybe.

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Sat 08/11/12 07:17 AM
thank you, a picture perfect moment with the moon broken only by the gentle rise of the tide.

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Sat 08/11/12 07:14 AM

Beautiful write....smokin
So many lives weaved into the tapestry of the Creator.
o↲many thanks, always a compliment

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Sat 08/11/12 06:54 AM
thank you Leigh, seems i didn't manage to comment.↲ thank you Rawwr and tb, much obligied by your kind words,

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Fri 08/10/12 03:21 PM
it is great to read, i am a fan of your mine.

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Fri 08/10/12 02:54 PM
smiles for you, i enjoy your writing.

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Thu 08/09/12 02:49 PM


As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky
I stand facing west with a tear in my eye,
It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave
and right there & then,
in the same light we bathe.

However, as is with its daily chore,
on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure.

During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush
I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush,
to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush
to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch.

So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night
does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light.
I have asked its last light, its very best ray
to shine down on you as it passes your way.

Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your
nights Knight,
my torch of endearment will burn evils plight.
My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke
to the morning song of the birds,
a soft chorus is spoke

Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn
I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn




Tears and cheeks still are my friends

I agree with Ted...This breathes not only life into the deepest sorrow, but hope into the living....:heart:

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Wed 08/08/12 04:42 PM

Nice write....smokin


Thanks up

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Wed 08/08/12 02:08 PM
Enjoyed as Ever

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Wed 08/08/12 01:35 PM

Nice write Poppashroom..

Bring on Unity..:thumbsup:


Indeed, together

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Wed 08/08/12 11:47 AM

Lovely write Rich...Not toying with tense, rhyming:wink:


Always grateful Vicki x

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Wed 08/08/12 11:47 AM

Lovely write Rich...Not toying with tense, rhyming:wink:


Always grateful Vicki x

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Wed 08/08/12 11:15 AM

the poem is really nice just a correction if you can make in 2nd stanza line 4 where it can be end shed with blood other than that the poem is really superb


Toying with tense,

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Wed 08/08/12 11:13 AM

the poem is really nice just a correction if you can make in 2nd stanza line 4 where it can be end shed with blood other than that the poem is really superb


Thank you, but no, I wrote it that way, thank you for reading though

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Wed 08/08/12 08:42 AM

Nice thank you for sharing. drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


Thanks Tazz,

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