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Thu 01/24/08 12:23 PM
as i lay here quietly as you sleep
i watch as you lay there, you look so sweet
your eyes shut gently not tight and stressed
i hear you breathing and watch your chest
i lay here thinking about our future
and wondered if we'd have a son or daughter
and still your lying here fast asleep
not caring or worrying about the week
not a thought about whats here or whats now
but far away and on a cloud
i wish i could join you in that perfect place
as i lay here and stroke your face
you look so lovely, such a beautiful princess
with no cares no worries and no stress
but still you sleep with out any quarms
so i lay down beside you and hold you in my arms
you feel so warm, so soft and gentle
i close my eyes and drift off a little
i wake just breifly to kiss you good night
then i lay down and hold you tight
with a smile on my face i fall asleep
till i see you in the morning sweet dreams my sweet xxxx




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Tue 01/22/08 11:49 AM
your cool otterman keep it coming

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Tue 01/22/08 11:44 AM
yeah alls good, just needed to vent as we do lol

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Tue 01/22/08 11:42 AM
how did you guess i just had to get it out happened a while ago now

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Tue 01/22/08 11:36 AM
as i sit here with thoughts in my head
the thought of losing you because of what you've not said
i sit here with a lump and it's growing in my throat
but i don't want to say anything, i don't want to go
but it gets so hard and a tear breaks free
you look and wonder whats wrong with me
i tell you it's nothing just a passing phase
but you give me that look, that blank glaze
it gets so hard i have to say something
so i tell you one morning after tossing and turning
its so hard to do because i don't know what will happen
i don't want to say i want to be happy
but you have not touched me for a week
not even a peck on the cheek
it hurts so much what have i done
i could not see you have found another one
for i was in love each and everyday
and now my loves gone what can i say
i loved you from the moment we met
i thought it was true, i thought it was meant
but that is past i must look forward now
i here your living together that must be nice
and six months pregnant wow what a choice
well goodluck from me your going to need it babe
i am a little bitter but i have good reason
i will vanish now from your mind and vision
i won't be friends it hurts to much
but i will just survive don't keep in touch x

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Tue 01/22/08 11:16 AM
Edited by jayf81974 on Tue 01/22/08 11:17 AM
thank you rozey your so sweet blushing

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Tue 01/22/08 11:12 AM
the tender touch of your fair skin
it gives me pleasure from within
my soul my heart my bodies on fire
with every touch it builds my desire
for i cant go a day with out your touch
your lips your hair i need you so much
your scent is like a drug to me
i need my fix i need thee
for you are the one my heart desires
i can't believe how this has transpired
we laugh so much and enjoy each day
i could not be with out you i would not know what to say
but you are here and i am yours
to hold for now and ever more
so hold me close and hold me near
i whisper three words into your ear
you look at me with such a smile
and kiss me tenderly for a while
i love it when we are both together
i wish that this could last forever

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Tue 01/22/08 11:04 AM
hi otter you is some writer thats a great poem man

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Tue 01/22/08 11:01 AM
nah does not suck your cool man drinker

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Tue 01/22/08 10:58 AM


as you enter the room
i pull you near
i whisper softly in your ear
the heat the touch sends a chill down your spine
you hold me close our bodies entwine
were going for it hell for leather
i don't believe it could get any better
we are so engrosed we forget to see
the que has gone down were next at hmv




Thanks, for your addition, you write well too...

thank you i do try but just started poetry today

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Tue 01/22/08 10:39 AM
as you enter the room
i pull you near
i whisper softly in your ear
the heat the touch sends a chill down your spine
you hold me close our bodies entwine
were going for it hell for leather
i don't believe it could get any better
we are so engrosed we forget to see
the que has gone down were next at hmv


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Tue 01/22/08 10:28 AM
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh well did she turn up ?

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Tue 01/22/08 05:41 AM
so people have some fun i welcome each and every one
its not that hard to write this stuff
so come on join me but you cant cus
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thats very bad come on guys
i will leave you people for a while
to play and laugh
i leave with a smile

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Tue 01/22/08 05:26 AM
Edited by jayf81974 on Tue 01/22/08 05:27 AM
hi yo people inda house
this is the place to let it out
just follow the flow to see where it go
just do eight lines not too much yo
lets see where it takes us
with out much effort
with out much fuss
so people have some fun i welcome each and every one

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Mon 01/21/08 03:06 PM
jay runs in says hi to every one then dashes out again lol

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Thu 01/17/08 02:25 PM
hi peeps a big hello from the uk

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Wed 01/16/08 11:59 AM
hug and kiss

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Wed 01/16/08 11:58 AM
bratz magazine

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Tue 01/15/08 01:32 PM
i am still here waiting patiently

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Tue 01/15/08 01:10 PM
ok