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Fri 08/07/09 08:22 AM
Thank You,
2km
Gossip






Her OMG Face


licking our sweat
so sweet a treat
as i eat you out
after i took you
to places we as
us never did
together

you crumble in
my hands like
old puddy

i pick you
up and call
you slutty

naturally
you slap me

No No No
the word
'wedding'
traps me

keywords:
good sex
captures me

WHOOSHes me
in like super
mans cape

a videod sensation
taped

the look of our
face

far from blank

aftergasms
speechless

with no words
to think


d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 06:44 PM
This gave me a dry throat. I felt short of breathe with anticipation wanting to know what happened and i still feel like i have no idea.

What i do know is this was one intense write! Awesome job on this one kc drinker

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 06:40 PM
bigsmileflowerforyou excellent tribute

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 06:36 PM
drool i need a woman like that! sad

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 06:34 PM
great write!

I especially liked the first stanza drinker

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 06:33 PM
happy all of that sounds good flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 03:16 PM


When you can stop

caring about yourself

and start caring about others

life just feels worth living

puting ourselves first is life

but does it makes us feel worthwhile

i have to sit back and smile

thank god for my time on trial

go on about living a life i was given

and doing what i do that makes me, me

loving lurking hurting yearning

wit widdling poetry



d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 11:53 AM
Of all of your poems, I think this one is my favorite so far.

I have read it a few times. flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 11:45 AM
Deeply rich in context. Very much enjoyed drinker

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/05/09 11:41 AM

It happened today. Haha:heart:


rofl nice! flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Tue 08/04/09 09:50 PM
Send me a link, I wanna hear! winking

I write alot of poetry. some i read obsessively. some more. this was more. i really liked this one and you just enhanced it to a whole nother level i can appreciate. i feel honored. im getting mushy, lol, thats all i have to say, thanks again!

rofl

d4tc's photo
Tue 08/04/09 09:42 PM


I have
never ever

picked up
a needle



never ever
will

try that
that
kills them



thems that tend to pretend
doctors, can keep them

I need something more to feel
then a prick, pricking me
with some plastic tube

I need sex as raw as it is

like a man hungry for a kid

a thumbs up needing a lift

just a hug would do me good

something to tempt my would

if you will i still feel real

raw hunger pains forming

before and after horny

corn on the cobb corny

hot tub warming

bubbles and endorphines

sponge your back relaxing

do i make you tense in su-
spense

or do i drench your thirst
first

i take you behind the barn

only it is not a barn

it is the top of my car

and we are both neck head
neck heads bobbling

kissing behind a fence
with planes taking off above

head as if this was a movie
moving you for real



I sex you up
as the director

and this is your
odd-dition



or as most would
call it

our
first date

d4tc's photo
Tue 08/04/09 09:09 PM
:heart: THIS!

Listening again! :banana:


:thumbsup: This is one of the coolest things anyone
has ever done for me!

Thank You Very Much Abra!

Love the laugh at the end... Most Awesome! bigsmile



You made my poem better than it was frustrated drinker




d4tc's photo
Tue 08/04/09 03:02 PM










I am sorry i am me. I know i can be better than this.

I don't know what i am doing. I find happiness in mysery and I hate mysery.
You don't know what that means. I smoke weed. i get high. Every day.
I never told you that because I felt you would think less of me.

I am at a point in my life where it is what i have always done.
Comfortably.
Everyone in my family does it so if you knew that you would have
no reason to look at me as just another white sheep if confused.

I don't drink much because my jaw becomes unglued. I think it irritates
my arthritus.

Not saying what I wouldn't
only more so infused.

Most times my eyes win when I lose. If I drink my jaw
tingles with a real pain its screws. Unscrews. Rescrews. The mouth
wants to mute the alcohol. I won't let it. I am skydiving into
a sess pool.

Forge it forgetten

forget it forgotten.

Soaring whilst I drown.













d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 09:28 PM
bigsmile Very Nice

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 09:26 PM




sex is the best
when you are with the one you love
want and need all in the same as
always you need them as they need
you


sex is no less
when you have this target to hit
with the right Miss and she looks
at you as no other Sir captures
her


her
eyes saw your eyes licking lips
tasting her from afar to close
sex is no less


you
wink your way in aim in at her
and say "i love" she says "you"
see the same as I see with you
sex is the best




d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 09:04 PM
flowerforyou very heartfelt lately. flowerforyou

great ponderings...


d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 03:05 PM


Why is it when
we do something
bad
We don't want
anyone to know

Covering our
tracks

Hiding the
fact

we must lie
to make those
who would not
understand
happy

as guilty
as it sounds

we make ourselves
appear in a sense
innocent

i am guilty
of this

I am sure
you don't
know my
closet

my bones

skeletons

I hide

I am
ashamed
of what
I love
at times

and this
could kill
someone as
emotional
as myself
or you for
that matter

tippy toes
patter

glass hearts
shatter

pissing glass
shards

wishing so hard

no one
would find
out

whom exactly

we are

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 01:16 PM

I, um, oh WOW, holy maw batman, I leave these words stuck in my craw!


rofl

thank you for the comments,

dfk flowerforyou

earthy - always! bigsmile :wink:

FaithfulOne flowerforyou



I feel...
Good :banana:

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/03/09 11:51 AM

Don't do this to me

Put me on the spot like this

You know you want to tell them

But do they need to know

Do they need to know

Do they want to know

Do they care to know

EVERY
THING

Can you not save

SOME
THINGS

or will you
create
more tension

suspenseded

orbiting

constantly
wondering



why?



we!




our?




hear!



why are we

reading this
wondering
is this
guy mad

or is he
happy

and all i
have to say
is both

God
made me this
way

a man of
mixed emotions
moving

I am just
pissed off
I can't live

forever