Community > Posts By > d4tc

 
d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:24 PM
Thought Provoking... :thumbsup:



d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:20 PM
:banana:
Eroticly Well Written.


Keep your head up! It's the only way to find her :wink:

d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:16 PM
Very Nice Tribute. flowerforyou


d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:13 PM
great use of the word 'generic' flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:10 PM
Great Write! drinker

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/27/09 03:16 AM





i dream of a day when all is fair in love
no war





When my woman is my woman and not some
skanky ruffled whore




i seem to forget what love feels like




i remember it was shiney




something like leather




a made up mind on a made up bed




no need for smelling my breathe
after what i just said





i hate words that rhyme with rhyme




it just seems like too much work
to put on the cape




can i just sit in my dunt-duh-nuns
for once?




eat on the couch



have sex in a theatre
when everyone is looking



I don't care
let them stare




this life is all i own

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/27/09 02:59 AM
that was awesome! :banana:

d4tc's photo
Sat 07/25/09 11:01 AM
Thank You
kc
vicki
slow




in the Flesh
(renamed from Condomless 2)


Dammit
this condom

Let me show
you the real
me

Feel the real
me

This feels
more like a
dream

where you are
who you are

and I am
not who
I am

I need to
feel you
more than
latex

you know how
much i hate
safe sex

It makes
me aimless

where i
have a desire
to drain less

in it
i feel weak

like when preying
for meet
on meat

i need to eat
and release

on you
in you

in you
on you

feeling you
feeling me

safe sex
is like

counting sheep

d4tc's photo
Sat 07/25/09 10:54 AM

We notice what we focus on
we dwell within our dreams
but life is like an opera
we're the actors in the scenes

If you wish to write a romance
you must implement the part
beseech a woman for a date
and be careful not to fart

Write out lines of poetry
be methodic in your verse
never let the woman know
your thoughts are so perverse

Tell her that she's wonderful
and you like the way she smiles
be sure to take a shower
and pay attention to the styles

Share with her your humor
but make sure it isn't gross
demonstrate your patience
and you'll eventually get close

Once you've written "friendship"
then love can get erotic
but scenes must go in baby steps
or she'll think that you're psychotic

So get your butt up on the stage
and audition with your lines
and this is no rehearsal
so be attired to the nines

And when you finally get the part
and you're accepted for the role
then you'll have to tie the knot
and begin to play that fool

laugh






Great write Abra laugh


d4tc's photo
Sat 07/25/09 10:51 AM
grumble I would rather have a sore back. Then a sore wrist. frustrated

d4tc's photo
Sat 07/25/09 10:09 AM
happy Great thoughts. thanks for sharing Queene flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:58 PM
drinker excellent write. heartfelt. drinker

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:53 PM
Thank You ArtGurl and 10001




Toxicless Love
(inspired by MsTeddy)



Patience

Greatness
of the wait
im under

goodbye winters
hello summers

sitting at
a little round
brown table
eating cherry
jello

poking it with
my spoon just
to watch it
wobble

there was a
time i wanted
one at full
throttle

gripping her
tighter than
this bottle

surely
intoxicated

i knew
slowing down
knowing now
what hurt how

much pain
as such
chained to
thoughts of
love

was it too much
to want to be
rode?

sucked?
and mentioned?

or were these
eyes always
destined to
be crimsoned?

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:55 PM

flowerforyou

Someday you will be intoxicated by love...



love love love love love
that was a very nice thing to say!
bigsmile Thank You MsTeddy! bigsmile


you just gave me an idea for a write :banana:


also, thank you lonestar, ainjel, kc and 2km

i hope you all have a great weekend!
drinker flowers

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:40 PM


Obviously
I love me

Or else
I'd be

dead

as

a chained door
to a store
out of business

what is this
madness?

if you saw
me now

you'd see me
at my saddest

flickering
flamming retinas

inner self
degrading
sad mess

get me those
pills

on
the top shelf
of the cabinet

i think yes
I think
I have had
enough

i feel weak
ends trend
no love

and the other
days require
less drugs

as it works
it pulls
and i chug

a drug

ME

i fly

FREE

if only i
was hooked
on someone

like she


d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:38 PM
Weeeeeeeeeeeeee
rofl


drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:34 PM
flowerforyou

i feel inspired

:thumbsup:

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:35 PM





I am happy
mad
sad
get lucky

the life
inside your
doll named
chucky

round
sore feet
oval space
sh-shuffling

blah blah blah
ready knife
evil hand
ch-ch-chucking

over water
I am
snorkeling

under water

I'm that dork
with things

entangling
strangling

founder
of such
means

seems
reluctant

purely
a
purpose
of a porpoise
of
a poor fish
screams

by
tangled means

surfaced it sings

nervous it brings

another wise
peculiar gleam

as top fish
of the sea
are the ones
with the wings

I am a dolphin
trying so hard
to sing

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:29 PM
Edited by d4tc on Thu 07/23/09 12:29 PM

I guess that you people didnt get this one..


I just read it. Great Write! drinker

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:27 PM
bigsmile Cool!