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Sat 01/17/15 12:22 AM
You know last week when you said
Those dirty things crammed into my head
It would be nice for you now to deliver
Especially when it just made me quiver

No need for denying claim has been made
My memory is just fine no it won't fade
Don't go saying you lied made it all up
I'm prepared for you to take care of this pup

Every day you ignore it just goes to show
Its mean and irresponsible you know
Go clear your head remove that fog
I'm no longer feeding you adopted dog


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Sat 01/17/15 12:06 AM
Have I named you
Said your name
Mentioned you
Like you claim

Something I said
What did I do
Its all pathetic
I don't even know you

Wave your finger
Blame some other
Mind your own business
I'm not your brother

Keep to your self
Especially those opinions
I have no use for you
Or any of your minions

If words bother you
Why even read
Move to the next
That's what you need

If I call you out
There will be no mistake
You Hypocritical whining
Morally corrupt fake

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Fri 01/16/15 11:48 PM
Huh? offtopic

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Fri 01/16/15 11:45 PM


It doesn't matter how long or short you still may have,
Should heaven decide to take you again,
You live as one should,
With God, with love.


I'm in for it I suppose! explode

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Fri 01/16/15 11:37 PM
Theodor Geisel - might very well be the best educated to top it all.

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Fri 01/16/15 11:00 PM
The dispersion of light
By the turbid medium
In the stroma of the iris
Sounds of major tedium

We all have an attraction
It is the oculus is why
A gateway to the soul
Those colors of the eye

Brown is most prevalent
Oh so very frequent
Shades include the black
Primarily brown and sequent

Blue seems a favorite
Mine are Green and gold
Hints of other colors
Disappear when you get old

I have a weakness
Girls with eyes of grey
Makes me weak kneed
What else can I say

Amber is an eye color
Also a girl I know
She has this aura
One that seems to glow

Then we have hazel
Major mix of things
I think of psychics
What good luck it brings

Red eyes of albino
Quite different to say the least
Don't let it freak you out
Not one of them is a beast

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Fri 01/16/15 09:42 PM


Nice Pansy,

I have a romantic side as well as a dark humoured side. Bitterness is the enemy of joy.Nice to see you are not.Nobody is worth becoming bitter and joyless for but many do.Glad you have kept some of the good aspects of these people with you.Very good. Sweet


C'mon now... Everyone has a Jedi or a Sith in them...just a matter of choosing which to let out when the time comes... laugh


...and then there's me who is a Lava Flea infested Mustafarian Jedi Wookie who thrives off the "force" of joyful bitterness. rant

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Wed 01/14/15 11:01 PM
I never care what people say of my writes. I'm like you Brug it only inspires me but never encourages me to change.

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Wed 01/14/15 10:56 PM

...Lady datura as there is with Lady Leigh....Around 25% of people have a toxic and difficult experience that can damage them forever. I am fortunately not one of them,so if I wanted one more time in their arms and breathing in their scent,that rare treasure is open to me.A dangerous siren,but beautiful.Fortunately i am not mourning.Peace and love


Brug, I understood this poem right away. There are many folks that either need a dose of peyote or datura to pick up on it. A hit or two of acid might do the trick.

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Wed 01/14/15 12:49 AM
"By Shoe"

Bruises appear, after a while,
Continue actions, they compile.

Every direction, it matters not,
No defenses, broke fingers you've got.

Aim to the head, access to be had
Prolong with arms, will remain bad.

Bend legs up to the chest,
Attention to back is best.

Look for swelling, black and blue,
Water filled balloons, blood flew.

Lacerations follow, excessive blows,
Favorite target, honking nose.

Time flows by, who knew
Swinging my hard sole shoe.

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Wed 01/14/15 12:37 AM
"By Spade"

Hands held high
Nice strong grip
To Explain before
I let this rip

Standing above
Feet holding firm
Pressing down
You still squirm

Head moves quickly
Only side to side
Focus to neck
This will glide

The voice begs
Nothing heard
Eyes beaten shut
Vision blurred

Raise to toes
Reach to the sky
Downward force
Increases is why

Below the chin
Contact made
Perfect decapitation
With my spade

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Wed 01/14/15 12:20 AM

I like the "blue but nice" line. I would like to read another one including the girl beneath the ice,with a face blue but nice. The rest was not as good as that line.That line is class.Inspired you strange man. Her chuff was chewy,blue and tough,If only I could defrost her just enough,mmmmm he thought,heating lamps,a series of pulleys,lifts and ramps. Keep writing mate. I have read much of it but comment rarely. I have little to add but encouragement. I am not into necro,gerbils or cats,but I will play with any words.I am no word racist. Peace




It would be nice to have a folder for poems unleashed and no holds barred for the disturbed. I would filled it with hundreds I have filed away. I found quickly you can only post 3 an hour here. My favorite I have ever written was for a fellow employee with a lazy eye. It would be removed if I were to post it here.

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Wed 01/14/15 12:14 AM

How do you keep the music playing
Alan Bergman / Marilyn Bergman / Michel Legrand

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BEizbjdJ99M

-- :cry: ... sniff, sniff...--



Metallica / Kill'Em All / Am I Evil?
James Hetfield / Lars Ulrich / Kirk Hammett / Cliff Burton

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u-HCHCuHMg

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Tue 01/13/15 11:59 PM

Your "E" is actually my "D"


Ok! I'll leave it alone. Keep it rolling! Its nice.

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Tue 01/13/15 11:53 PM

This is quite flattering. Nobody's ever written me a poem before how sweet tears


U_R Very wise of you to choose the correct words but put more thought into it. Is it written for you or at you?

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Tue 01/13/15 12:51 AM





Mmmmm... Since you're asking...:smile:

My first question about rehab is... Should it actually be set in:
A. Correctional facility / prison
B. Asylum / psych ward
C. Addiction facility / rehab center
D. Only the protagonist's head


Yup. D. Could be any of those things then.

Talented. flowers


Thanks for taking the time :wink:
The second question is:
Should the protagonist be:
A. Male
B. Female
C. Remain unknown


C.

I love surprise endings. (Only if I don't have to live them. laugh) Your writing seems to fit that very well.



Kewl...
Third question... About the ending:
A. Escapes to "better" life
B. Released
C. Lets everything go through reflection
D. Ruminates over and over



E. Committed for life

A.C.E.

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Mon 01/12/15 05:40 AM
Through the haze
No clear ice
Appeared a face
Blue but nice

Eyes were open
Filled with fright
Jaw hung low
Her teeth were white

Strains of hair
Atop the plate
Slight view
Of her pate

Hands held high
Unthawed escape
Around her neck
Was tied some crepe

Clothes flowed out
As if in space
Held in position
Perfect place

Peace has come
Thanks to my push
The ice thin
As I kicked that tush

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Mon 01/12/15 05:12 AM
sad

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Mon 01/12/15 02:41 AM
Sicken thoughts, In my mind
Pain and suffering intertwined

Not for me but for you
Oh the horror I can do

Cause you anguish for the thrill
Confine the movement halt the will

Thwart sound from the voice
Gag the breathe only one choice

Staunch fluid to the brain
Inflict a beating with the chain

Regain consciousness just in time
Fill the wounds with salt and lime

Ply the nails off the fingers
Smell burnt flesh that lingers

Expose to fluids both hot and cold
The mind takes to parts untold

Pinning eyelids open wide
Horrid dryness wilted hide

Arms stretched above the head
Feeling gone but your not dead

Switch to hanging by the feet
Precise height hungry rats will eat

Break bones one by one
Then we shock just for fun

Slit the throat end it all
For the pigs make last call

Now the pleasure is back anew
This raccoon killed my dog Boo







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Mon 01/12/15 01:44 AM

"Questions"


Who is the Devil
If not a confounder and a tease
Thought mighty and proud
Yet only a prisoner of his own desires

Who am I
In my high minded vanities
I left a life I once knew
Only time will tell.





One in the same!