Topic: Coition
roughrouge's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:41 PM


-----Coition-----

Approaching me arms open wide
Her being the reason, lust in mine eyes.
Naked, as the day she was born
Aching for me to make her moan.

I travelled down to her sweet divine,
Pink lips opening like the great divide.
Clitoris erectile starring me in the eyes,
Coitious union the ultimate design.

Passions, desires, clouding my brain
Sensations, emotions, pulsating through my veins.
Wanting, desiring, obsessing, possessing,
Lascivious eyes feasting progressing.

Above you, around you, upon you, beside you
I delve inside bringing you to your peak
Rythmic sensations probing deep
Climatic exultation the ultimate beat.

Unsatisfied I dove between your legs
My tongue giving you the ultimate end
Moist tender warm delicious and sweet
I got lost in your orchid sewwt orchid beneath. beneath.

Baptized in the river flowing from beneath
Lust holy waters running down my cheeks.
Tasting the texture of your humaness within
Consuming all your delicacies therein.

Spent I lay feeling your body heat
holding you near still keeping it deep.
Your cheeks still a fiery pink
Glowing like embers on a burning rink.

Delighting in the aroma comming from beneath
Beauituful fragnance delicious and sweet.
Unsurpassed joy shinning from our eyes
We cling to the lovers who live inside.
We cling to the lovers who live inside.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:49 PM
Okay Stop ohhhhhhhhhh it's getting HOT in
here lol erotic and very good reading.

heatherrae's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:50 PM
wow, thats a good pick up line, you should try it in bars.
it'll work.

roughrouge's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:51 PM
thank you. hey, i'll cool it off a bit :)

roughrouge's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:52 PM
coming from a woman heather, i'll sure jump at the advice...thanks

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:54 PM
Hummm you just better hope you know her well or wear a face mask lol

roughrouge's photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:59 PM
lol txs you're funny and good

no photo
Mon 01/15/07 12:59 PM
LMAO @ facemask!!

TXS you are too funny

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/15/07 01:38 PM
it's more than a pick up line...
it's a whole chapter!!!

good read!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 01/15/07 06:56 PM
man, that was no pick up line
it was an encounter...
very intimate and beautiful...

and yes, it's hot in here!!!

(splashes face with cold water)

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/16/07 01:18 AM
WOW!!!!!