Topic: Dare devil
greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:58 AM
Little boy with a skateboard
Scraped and bruised so badly
Now wants to BMX
Jumps over everything madly.
His tire is flat and lifeless
He now runs the 4 wheeler track
Riding thru the woods, hes lost c
cant seem to find his way back
He finally builds a tree-fort
and much to his dismay
The bungee cord he tried out
Was old and worn and frayed.
He just cant seem to get it right
He tries hard to be tough
But all his friends just mock him
So he decides to call their bluff.
He climbs on to the roof top
decides he will jump down
the neighborhood children
have excitedly gathered 'round
He takes a real deep breath
hes scared beyond belief.
His mom calls him in its dinner time
Much to this dare devils relief.

kojack's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:59 AM
Wow very realistic

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:03 PM
Awesome girl boy was he lucky :)
Mom saved the day again lol

LAMom's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:10 PM
That brings back memories!!! D :)

no photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:42 PM
Awesome write Tressia!! Ahh those lil dare deevils , if we momma's only
knew half of what they do!!

karmafury's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:55 PM
Knew I should have timed it closer to a meal. Well written.

fiercemunky's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:58 PM
unfortunately my mom didn't call before i jumped...oh well - just a
bruised tailbone...great poem

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/24/07 01:00 PM
Sounds like my 4 year old...
and my 9 year old...

DANE1973's photo
Wed 01/24/07 01:02 PM
Hahaha me too,ouch broken rib.Ha ouch ha oww.laugh