Hey Karma, it's for you buddy.
The band of men stormed the beach,
Their swords sharp and drawn,
Among them all was a man,
Called Thorfinn the strong,
With sword and ax and spear,
They would surely win the day,
Karma went berserk,and Dane charged in,
With Thorfinn on the brink,
Then one good volley from the wall,
Caused our Norsemen to think,
They needed a shield,broad and thick,
When a wagon they spied,
They broke off a wheel,gave it a name,
T'was Thorfinn that held it high,
The town was lost as the men stormed in,
They looted and snatched and grabbed,
The flames went high into the night,
And Karma had to be nabbed,
The men sailed home laiden with gold,
It was a beautiful sight,
When Karma woke the next morn he was itching for a fight
Seems Thorfinn had his share of the loot,
And didn't want to give it up,
When Karma found out,he gave him the boot and picked up Thorfinn's
mighty sheild,
And gave him a blow that layed him low,
A blow to which any man would yeild.

Dane,

Really Awesome!

Well I try.

Kewl Dane!!! (((hugs)))

you make a veteran proud...
good work!

He won't hold out on me again. Thanks Dane.

WOW Dane...You made me see that!

Great visual...I like it alot.

Thanks guys, I enjoyed writing it at 2 this morn.It actually wrote
itself.And I don't think any one is going to hold out on you again
Karma. Thanks for the hugs catch.

Kewl one really good

way cool dane

Dane you're amazing at 2 this morning (when I gave up and went to bed
lol) I was so tired I couldn't see clearly and you wrote this awesome
poem! Great job babe XOXOXOX

That and I was up again at 6 this morning.lolI get loopy now.

another one!!!

Most awesome Dane most awesome