Topic: what a mess
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Fri 01/26/07 10:14 PM
i wish i was dying
cause lately all i been doing is crying
my lifes a mess
i have to confess
everyones been lying
im tired of trying
nothing has been right
since we were all tight
i have come unwound
now theres no one around
someday i will come to
and we will all be true
just not yet today
i hide it so well
no one can tell
just how we all feel
but no one is here
to lend a trusting ear
no ones shirt to tug
when in need of a loving hug

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Fri 01/26/07 10:17 PM
Husky ((hugs)))
thier is always someone thier... D

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Fri 01/26/07 10:21 PM
got a letter today saying this poem is also getting published with my
other one called twisted feelings

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/26/07 10:23 PM
Congrats to you,,,, :smile:

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Fri 01/26/07 10:27 PM
just read th poem,,,yup...
sounds like a mess...
now pick yourself back up and write us a happy one!!!

by th way...good work new bee...smokin

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Fri 01/26/07 10:31 PM
thanks you two its great support that makes me wanna keep writing

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Sat 01/27/07 03:36 AM
Husky, that is a great and touching poem.

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Sat 01/27/07 06:15 AM
Very heartfelt and congrats to ya ((((((Hug)))))))

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Sat 01/27/07 06:19 AM
its cool you can wright sad ones but dude you need to think happy
thoughts once in a while right dizzydean5