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Topic: ~Take Me Home~
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Thu 05/01/08 06:13 AM
Where are you sweet lover if only I knew
This fear of you lost has come eerily true
This darkness of night I know you're there
A synchronized breath that we could share

Her softened lips release this gentle sigh
Within a lonely bed I'm left wondering why
Feeling your presence as I lie here still
Such bittered loneliness has stolen my will

My withering heart is now turning to stone
Now left with such sorrow as I eerily moan
Slivers of pale moonlight enter this room
This fractured existence has sealed my doom

Once I was strengthened by such love & care
With my heart I exposed and my soul to bear
Perhaps I am not worthy of such a fine gift
Unanchored & listless I'm hopelessly adrift

Some uncharted course which now lies ahead
Piercing ill shadows of thee unspoken dead
Such anguishing screams they pitifully wail
Stripping my sanity as I hopelessly prevail

Take me now Lord;I'm desperate to come home
Such a welcomed choice than to perish alone
No longer a dry husk;I shall return to dust
Though my soul shall rise for in you I trust

Written by CyPoet 5/1/08
:cry: brokenheart

beautyfrompain's photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:14 AM
I'm with ya.....come Lord Jesus!

TwilightsTwin's photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:15 AM
flowerforyou Nice work, I think many here can relate.ohwell

May777's photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:21 AM


so hauntingly beautiful,..thankyou for putting words to feelings that are so,...

may flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:22 AM
Awwwwwww (((CY))) flowerforyou :heart:
Good write!

pkh's photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:37 AM
awww you are worthy and you will find that love never give up my friendflowerforyou beautiful write

no photo
Thu 05/01/08 06:46 AM
Edited by CyPoet on Thu 05/01/08 07:06 AM
B~F~P-:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile:
T~T-:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile:
May777-:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile:
MsTeddy-:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile:
P~K~H-:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile:
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yhuQIW529ec

Sharris's photo
Thu 05/01/08 07:17 AM
Edited by Sharris on Thu 05/01/08 07:20 AM
You are not alone,
You just haven't seen
This beauty that waits
For you have been
Giving your time
When awaiting right here
Standing beside you
Crystal and clear
Her heart has been holding
This spot just for you
Blinded, the light,
The same for you, two
Feeling the covers
Can't distance this pain
Look deeper into
These eyes that remain.

early thoughts

no photo
Thu 05/01/08 07:25 AM
Dear Sharris,thank U sweetheart.((bear~hug))
:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :smile: :=)

SCURLOCK's photo
Thu 05/01/08 07:32 AM
life is too preciousflowerforyou

zanne46's photo
Thu 05/01/08 08:17 AM
very nice Cyp.....:smile: flowerforyou :heart:

rush2001's photo
Thu 05/01/08 08:20 AM
That was beautiful.flowerforyou flowerforyou

mteagle31's photo
Thu 05/01/08 08:33 AM

You are not alone,
You just haven't seen
This beauty that waits
For you have been
Giving your time
When awaiting right here
Standing beside you
Crystal and clear
Her heart has been holding
This spot just for you
Blinded, the light,
The same for you, two
Feeling the covers
Can't distance this pain
Look deeper into
These eyes that remain.

early thoughts


Very well put!!
Great write cy...drinker

LAMom's photo
Thu 05/01/08 09:58 AM
:heart: Cy :heart:

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/01/08 10:04 AM
(((((Cy))))) :cry: :heart:

Luv, you are worthy. We all are.

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Thu 05/01/08 11:18 AM
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pkh's photo
Thu 05/01/08 11:19 AM
thank you sending you big ole bear hugsflowerforyou

no photo
Thu 05/01/08 03:14 PM
Beautifully written cyflowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 05/06/08 05:35 PM
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CYbrokenheart

trying_to_fly's photo
Tue 05/06/08 11:44 PM
I just read this poem to SimplyElla on the phone and her and I LOVED it!!! It was GREAT!!! Lots of thoughts in it!!! It was WONDERFUL!!!drinker drinker

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