Destroyed and Reborn

Whispers in the darkness
With tauntings of a heart,
Playful like a nymph,
Dormant from the start.

Subtile visions blurred
Within this simple mind,
Something now is stirred
And forced me out of line.

Like an angel giving blessings
Or the gentle kiss of wind....
Something grabs my heart
And causes me to spin.

Emotions running rampant,
Running wild just like a beast,
Attacking from the shadows;
Preparing for a feast.

I find that I am prey
And hunted silently.
Remade and torn apart
Reborn unviolently.

The haze floats from my vision;
My strength is found renewed!
My heart is now devoured
By an angel in my view.

The strange sensations pass,
My heart no longer seen
And yet it is replaced
By my Lover's soul in me.

Fadedspirit 5/10/2008

Oh my. Beautiful.

hummmmm,....makes one think,..

great write dude

Bare Breath

How to breathe,
When your truth reveals.
How heart desires,
And longings so real.
Your soul,hers in.
Her soul, yours out.
Takes my wind.
My whisper shouts.
Tender, vulnerable,
Admission you share.
Has touched me deeply,
My breathing is bare.

Raine Les 5/14/2008
so beautiful.

wonderful so glad to see you my friend

Wow....never expected to see so many responses here, but thank you all. I'm glad you liked this one.

Good to see you too pkh.

Ahh....Sharris....Thank you much for that poetic and lyrical response.

nice read faded

good to see ya