Topic: The Rose in the Dawn
someguy1313's photo
Thu 06/05/08 12:47 PM
In a dying bed of roses Overgrown by weeds and grass, In among the briars and the thorns, Grew a lovely scarlet rose Clothed in jewels and in warmth, Smooth as velvet and scarlet as the dawn. How my heart throbbed with delight As its beauty caught my eye. How I wished I could hold it in my arms, To hold and adore, And have forevermore, Its fragrance held me captive like a charm. I just glimpsed upon this rose In the twinkling eye of time, For a moment, then its perfume passed my door. But my mind can still recall That rose's passion and its warmth, My heart is stolen by that rose in the dawn.
An Eternal Sadness:::::::::::::::::::

iceprincess's photo
Thu 06/05/08 12:51 PM
very vivid it captivates the senses.......flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 06/05/08 02:06 PM
Humm the vision of a bed of roses and the scent they reveal nice oneflowerforyou

someguy1313's photo
Thu 06/05/08 04:44 PM
Thank you ladieshappy flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Thu 06/05/08 05:30 PM
Heartfelt! flowerforyou

neveragain's photo
Fri 06/06/08 03:57 AM
flowerforyou wow flowerforyou

someguy1313's photo
Fri 06/06/08 05:57 PM
long time... How have you been? Call me sometime.

someguy1313's photo
Sun 06/08/08 06:41 PM
long time... How have you been? Call me sometime.

neveragain's photo
Wed 06/18/08 05:34 AM
will do:wink:

calmguy3's photo
Wed 06/18/08 05:59 AM
A Truly Awsome
kaleidoscope of words
well done!!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 06/18/08 06:30 AM
Great write!