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Topic: Need help...Need a poem
Torylynn Joined Sun 03/09/08 Posts: 119	Mon 06/16/08 04:16 PM
I need a poem about love, honesty, loyalty, and allthe good things about being in love..The moments are out of this world and so is the touch, the kiss, the embrace...all this need to be somehow tied into it... I am in love with someone I met off here...but we are not able to see each other due to some trouble they got in...I need something that is touching and heartfelt...I fell this person like I said I would never fall for someone..He knocked down that wall...He holds the key...Can someone please help me out...torylynn

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/16/08 04:17 PM
I recommend MsWiz or AngelLight. They are specialists in this field.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Mon 06/16/08 04:17 PM
How much does the job pay?

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 06/16/08 04:19 PM
I recommend MsWiz or AngelLight. They are specialists in this field. i agree, a humble fan

grneyedldy1967 Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 2854	Mon 06/16/08 04:19 PM
Your hands around my waist. Your gentle warm embrace. It feels like I'm in heaven; I don't want to leave this place. Your lips upon my own, Soft and full of bliss You make my heart race When you give me just one kiss Its something about you And the things that you do. My days are so much brighter And its all because of you. You make me so happy Than ever before. Theres so much about you That I truly adore; With a glance of your face And the sound of your voice This once saddened heart Is now filled with rejoice. Its the little things you do that puts a smile on my face And its all because of you That my heart begins to race Ive finally found happiness After all Ive been through I wake up with a smile And its all thanks to you.

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d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/16/08 04:24 PM
Your hands around my waist. Your gentle warm embrace. It feels like I'm in heaven; I don't want to leave this place. Your lips upon my own, Soft and full of bliss You make my heart race When you give me just one kiss Its something about you And the things that you do. My days are so much brighter And its all because of you. You make me so happy Than ever before. Theres so much about you That I truly adore; With a glance of your face And the sound of your voice This once saddened heart Is now filled with rejoice. Its the little things you do that puts a smile on my face And its all because of you That my heart begins to race Ive finally found happiness After all Ive been through I wake up with a smile And its all thanks to you. This will do! Very Nice! I think you captured the whole ambience of the request.

Torylynn Joined Sun 03/09/08 Posts: 119	Mon 06/16/08 04:58 PM
Thank you greeneyed...I think that will be just fine....you got away with words...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/17/08 07:03 AM
Thank you greeneyed...I think that will be just fine....you got away with words... So are you satisfied with greeneyed's beautiful poem? She did a wonderful job.

Torylynn Joined Sun 03/09/08 Posts: 119	Tue 06/17/08 11:26 AM
Yes I am wolf....It is in the mail now...It resembles everything...and touches the heart...she is good...it made my girlfriend tear up...but under the circumstance yes I love it...hopefully the person it was written for will to..