Topic: First Kill. Markman000
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Sun 06/22/08 07:01 AM
Edited by markman000 on Sun 06/22/08 07:03 AM


First Kiss not First kill sorrylaugh



I want to do it, But I'm afraid.
I don't know how you will react, Or what you will say.

I don't want to mess up, And look like a fool.
I don't want you to think, That I'm not cool.

Will you give me a sign, Then I will try.
I really like you, It's just I'm shy.

I'm going to take the chance, And do it right now.
I'm going to show you, That I do know how.

I'm thinking about you, As I reach for your chin.
I gaze into your eyes, As I pull you in.

When our lips attach, I close my eyes.
Your lips are warm, And softer than mine.

When we finish, I fell something in my heart.
It's of love, And I don't ever want to depart.

As I think, All about this.
I remember that, It was my first real kiss.

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Sun 06/22/08 07:03 AM
thats sick sick laugh

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Sun 06/22/08 07:08 AM
Sweetness glasses

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Sun 06/22/08 07:20 AM
Very nice poem...it is really sweet.

Uhhh I just have to ask if that Subject was a Freudian slip since your screenname is 'markman"(marksman?)huh

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Sun 06/22/08 07:21 AM

Very nice poem...it is really sweet.

Uhhh I just have to ask if that Subject was a Freudian slip since your screenname is 'markman"(marksman?)huh
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