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Topic: Doo do do do dooo I'm lovin' it!
post_coitum Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 766	Mon 07/07/08 07:44 AM
The sky is dark, the air slightly chilled. There we stand tightly wrapped in the comfort of each other's arms. The sky flashes brightly with explosions of color, and through the booming of the fireworks I hear my heart beating fast. Though the sky is filled with wonder, bright boomers and hearts, my gaze is caught by the fire in her eyes.

TheCaptain Joined Wed 09/06/06 Posts: 44412	Mon 07/07/08 08:01 AM Edited by TheCaptain on Mon 07/07/08 08:01 AM


s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/07/08 08:03 AM
"i like that"

post_coitum Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 766	Mon 07/07/08 08:06 AM
thanks mate

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 07/07/08 08:12 AM
That's really very nice!

post_coitum Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 766	Mon 07/07/08 08:13 AM
Thanks hun....How was everyone's 4th?

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 07/07/08 08:16 AM
I got a beautiful grandson for an early 4th gift!! The rest was good, too!! Not too crazy!! Hope ya'll had a good one, too!!!

post_coitum Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 766	Mon 07/07/08 08:25 AM
Mine was great, I started dating this really sweet girl over the weekend.

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