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DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 07/14/08 08:47 AM
you broke the chains and freed my heart you gave me love and hope and a brand new start you held me close and kissed me deep you made me feel alive and made me lose some sleep you showed me love and made me smile you made me laugh at myself and my sense of style you touched my hand and held my soul you made me take a chance and lose my self control you still are here and still with me my heart and soul are yours but i've never felt so free

JUSTSAYINGHELLOO Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 500	Mon 07/14/08 08:50 AM
WOW..................NICE POWERFUL

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Mon 07/14/08 08:52 AM
That was awesome. Thanks for the write.

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 07/14/08 08:54 AM
these are song lyrics i've bounced around in my head for years. i know exactly what the finished song would sound like. if i only had any musical ability whatsoever...

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 07/14/08 08:55 AM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/14/08 05:29 PM


DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Tue 07/15/08 02:02 AM
thank you to all!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/15/08 04:27 AM
"and held my soul.." Beautifully written...

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